Wow... Heart-wrenchingly beautiful! This story very much resonates with the darker themes of the manga and does so accurately. It felt like we climbed right into Kyo's head...

I love how despite the depression Kyo finds himself at the end, somehow he's learned to rely on Kazuma for security and comfort.

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k so... all I can say is 'It made me cry'

That's hard to now... cuz im done being depressed over every goddamn thing that I come across... but this fic...

was written eloquently, it was sweet and angsty and it made me cry... you made my day/night whatever

i really enjoyed it thnxx

so of course, if you had a Yuki angst-emo fic, i HAD to read your Kyou one.

yayitskyou!

& i liked this a lot, too.

[ still not coherent ]

i'm SO glad you hard Haru in there.

if only for a second.

[ gawds. people ask me; Kyou or Yuki? &i'm all, "Haru, bish!"

xD

.. yeah. he's love.

i also like how you inserted Shigure in both of these.

[ Make sure he doesn’t disappear. Cats tend to go wherever insures their aloneness when they plan to die ]

i really like that line.

makes an impact, like "O_O"

hoshizzat.

good job.

awesome

(dances) this is so good

aw. this is so sad! the kazuma kyo relationship is cute.

This fic is really good. You had me in tears.

wow. this is really good...but really sad...but really good. extremely well-written, great job conveying emotion and creating imagery. superly sad but ultimately lovely little fic you have here.

have a nice day

that was so beautifully written. love it! _

All the angst i could hope for and then more!

This was a very well written story. I think your approach on the character's feelings and thoughts is pretty accurate and quite realistic.

I was able to feel the pain Kyou and Kazuma were experiencing, and even got a chill through my spine (for real!) at the part when, after going back 2 normal from his transformation, Kyou is being held by Kazuma and weakly says through sobs that he didn't start the fight.

Amazing hehe, keep writing like that please :D

The only problem i saw were some minor grammar mistakes, but that was all.

Congrats! And sorry for the long comment .; I don't usually do that.

Oh that's so sweet! I wish there were more fics like this.

I really liked it. You really brought Kyo's character, and feelings as a child to life.

-Keep wrighting!0!

Please write more! I love your take on little Kyou!

dude that is really really good. i luved it. theres nothin else to say, it was excellent.