I sure hope you have finished grad school and have time to write again. This story is well-written and compelling. I've re-discovered itafter a decadeon three different sites. I prefer FFN because the screen can be dark, but I will take the eye strain for the benefit of another uncensored chapter. Please continue. You have a gift rarely seen.

I read the completed chapter on adult fanfiction and I think you captured Sephiroth perfectly. How crazy his mind is. I love it! Best story of him yet!

The beginning of the story was very philosophical and poetic. I had to think about it for a while. But as the story progressed I liked how you wrote Sephiroth. Too many people make him so soft but he's not soft or broken. He's mad and wicked. I think you captured him wonderfully. Finally an in character fic for Sephiroth. But sadly I think this fic has been abandoned.

I like his twisted mind. I think this sounds more like Sephiroth than most of the other stories I read. Look forward to more.

I am so sad to see that this hasn't been updated in years. I didn't really care much about it before I started reading, because I didn't think I would enjoy it enough to bother with it being incomplete. Boy, was I wrong.

This is by far some of the best literature I've ever read, published and unpublished. Your language is fantastic, and the way you portray the characters is undoubtedly the best I've ever read for these characters. I absolutely love how dark and twisted it is, the genre is perfect for the pairing, and I really wish more people would write stories like this, because it's so very believable. This is so hauntingly beautiful, despite the horrible and gruesome themes.

I'm heartbroken that I'll never see a conclusion to this fantastic piece of fan fiction, but I hope that you at least some day find this, and get to read the praise you've gotten, as it is completely deserved.

Read the M rating of Chapter 13 and holllly smokes. That gave me chills. o-o

This is probably one of the darkest stories I've read here so far.

It's a real shame this wasn't continued because this story sent a shiver through my spine when I just started reading it. I'm a sucker for dark stories and this just sucked me in.

I read it again. Incredible.

This is a story you don't read everyday

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!

awesome job! another amazing chapter!

soo beautiful!

Please tell me there is more to this story on both sites please

TT I knew when I read this story I took a chance because it's been a year since the last update. *Sniffles* I LOVE THIS STORY OMG! I'm glad I did read it, despite the yearlong hiatus. I hope that someday you come back and pick this up again, it's really well written. Too many good stories like these collect dust and never get returned to again, which is sad when it's one that's hard to take your eyes off of. I will add this to my fav's and look forward to an update in the future. :3

Yes! This is what I've been searching for. Sephiroth isn't a puppet and Aerith isn't a simpleton with the innocence of a child. I would love to see more.