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I love how you did the whole taking-out-Kagura's-heart thing. It was awful, and terrifyingly described.

This was engrossing from the very first line. I especially like the line about yelling inhuman things. All in all a very interesting take on things.

I like this. The words are very poignant, and the characters seem quite realistic. There are some awkward points in the text that could probably be fixed in subsequent revisions, but overall, it's quite good.

Wow. I always love these things about Kagura, and Kanna. Those two fascinate me.

I find that I don't think much about the other characters. . . I like this. A lot. Awesome piece of work! I try, but I can never hold a candle to the works of my predecessors in fanfiction. . . Thanks for sharing.

Hmm, very interesting. I like when Sesshoumaru told her off. Kagura is a bit immature, isn't she? And she does contol the wind like Naraku controls her. I thought I was the only one who considered that. Another masterpiece of a fic!

another wonderful work. why would kanna think there was a change in the breeze? did she suck in kagura or something? ah, im so juvinile and dumb.

That was very well written...when I first saw how long it would be, I had my doubts, I admit. However, you still managed to put some deeper meanings in your story...at least, I hope that's what you were doing. D Great story.

I loved the way that this story spins around like the wind.

Kagura's wish to be free, the way she was being childish throughout - in her quest for independance - adulthood. o.o;