I know the odds of you adding another chapter are slim, but this is really good so if you could update that would be great.

Good! Update, please!

This is interesting, but...kind of didn't make sense to me in places. A man is burning to death, and his son just watches calmly? And WHILE the man is burning, he tells his son to write a letter? If I was burning, I'd be screaming in pain and fear, not calmly asking someone to write a letter. And the boy's letter just calmly says "Father is burning to death and sends his love"? What kind of soulless, unemotional kid IS this? Also, if Prince Philip is supposed to be the prince in the movie, please be aware that the movie prince has blue eyes. So it doesn't make sense that this kid you're writing about envies his eyes, because "mine were light blue." Most of all, I think this narrator needs to have more personality and character, not be so detached and unaffected by anything. He's living through events that should be horrifying and traumatic, but he acts like it's nothing important. JMO.

This seems interesting. Yes, your English grammar is just a little off, but not enough to make this unreadable. It might be a good idea to find a beta, but believe me I've seen many fics written by non-English speakers that are completely unintelligible. Yours is not that bad. Looking forward to an update. Beth Palladino

Hi! No-ones reviewed you yet so I'm going to steal the honour of reviewing first. First of all, is English your first language? I ask because a lot of the grammer in that chapter was a bit strange and made it difficult to read. If you'd like some help, I can recommend some great beta's. I like the idea of doing the story from an objects p.o.v and the fact that its a new object i.e one that doesn't feature in the original story. I'm curious to see what happens in the next chapter so please update soon!