Aww. I absolutely love your interpretation of how Martin and Diana would be if Martin were to be sick. 3

omfg i love it (L)

cute story though I don't see the romance in the fic. it should be labeled as family.

if you want to label it as romance, you could have added something on the last part...

"Thanks. I owe you a lot..."

"No you don't. I'm your sister; this is what I do. I love you...night."

"Night..." I love you too. he thought

like that!

anyway! your a good writer! great job!

Cute story! But.. I don't see the romance...

Aw. Awesome job!

-WT

Very romance!Good try!

It was an excellent piece, barring the fact that you kept forgetting simple words such as "the", "and", "with", etc.

I also fail to comprehend why you would label it "Romance" when there was no romance involved.

There's a lot of maturity in the writing style. Despite the rating, I think it would do well if you posted it at Adult Fan Fiction. Net.

This touched me a little. I hate getting sick too, so I can relate to Martin. Please do more!

Hey this is very good i love it and Diana/Martin fics are so cute :) :P

Loved it. I really think that Di and Martin are great as sister and brother, although I have to admit, I like seeing them as more, too. Di is so caring and Martin does really appreciate her. It's why he goes to such great lenghts during their missions to keep her safe...

-Red

aww... really cute! shme their step-siblings

How SWET! I hope you write an epilouge!

aw! I loved it! It was cute!

Quite untrue, Martin does get sick in the series. Twice if I'm not mistaken.

Anyway, not so much angst in this one. Really nice though. ;)