You must have not connected with the story of Sesshomaru and Rin. This is not how it would have ended, Rin would have waited years for Sesshomaru, she would never agree to be someone else's wife, nor would she hold a grudge against Sesshomaru. Rin would not have been happy without him, she would have never stayed in the village in the first place. Everyone knows Rin is stubborn and would not be anywhere else besides being with Sesshomaru. Nice try but please make sure your endings are more realistic next time. It could have been a bit more in depth too, for both Rin and Sesshomaru as far as their inner thoughts amd feelings. Thank you for trying hun

So much drama, and I love it. As I am hunting for SesshRins of old, I stumbled upon yours. It's interesting reading the fanfics from when Inuyasha was yet incomplete. I like that you're keeping it in character. We only knew Rin as a child, so really an Older Rin can act like anything, so I am excited to see what you will do with that. I would be interested to know your thoughts are on the end of the series. This fic is over a decade old! Hope you are still having fun reading the reviews!

loved it but the ending took me by supise

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My reaction after reading this:

I hate this! But, I love this! But it's so sad! But it's such a good story! But he didn't get the girl! But she's happy with her life and isn't that he wanted for her!

Yea basically my emotions were at war with each other. Had so many conflicting feelings about this story. Well done, you made me cry in the end!

It's so fucking sad like damn

dont change anything you are a great writer

like in my last comment this is exsactly ( i cant spell don't jugde) how in want rin and sesshomaru relasionship to be like. To Be Continued ...maybe

i think so far the story is awsome i love sesshomaru has a better connetion with rin, also i think your story is how rinxsesshomaru should be but rin would be older

I just thought that maybe Rin would follow Sesshomaru forever even if she grows is innocent and obsessed with her lord.
I enjoyed your story so much! I love cothurnus!

I loved it, but hated it at the same time. ITS A GOOD THING!

I loved your story 3 The emotions I felt when she said goodbye made me so sad!
(Which means you did good)

Great story Amara D

honestly speaking ...
u made me cry on my b'day... :'(
rin and sess are made for each other ...
u could make it a happy ending... :(

I started reading this out of boredom, just to occupy my time, and now that I've read this I litterally felt my heart shatter into a million pieces. That was so beautiful. Xx

I't nice.
Though I would love it if they really be together forever.

what the hell,i thought rin would have left with him,what kinda of story is this,i dont like the ending