Wow, damn, that was really good story. Though I seriously expected some "Damned Island" stuff pulled out at the middle. Nevertheless, as much as I am dubious about what have happened really at the end, I do love this story.

Wow interesting story I honestly don't know how I missed it. I love the loop idea and the explanation at the end was great. I could honestly see this turning into a possible ending for eva or as a movie itself. I love the mystery of it and how it honestly kept me guessing of what really happen till the last chapter. Great story writing I love it.

Well done. Very nice ending. I'd usually have more to say, but I just re-read "Re-Take" today and I might be a little burned out from that. If you haven't read it , you totally should.

Thanks for writing!

I like the title of this chapter. Very apropos.

Since you mentioned grammar in your AN, I won't nitpick about the technical errors in this chapter. Curious to see where you're going with this story. Third Impact alternate world? Weird after-effect of Third Impact? Or something else entirely?

Looking forward to finding out!

Noticed some spelling issues, if you have the time and inclination it might be worthwhile to have someone proofread this.

At first I thought it was weird that they called each other / introduced themselves by their first names, since in Japan it would be more appropriate for strangers (or new coworkers) to use their family names. But then I decided that you went with first names on purpose to show that they still have ingrained habits when it comes to interacting with each other.

Don't correct me if I'm wrong about that. :P

Anyway, enjoying this so far. On to the next chapter!

Absolutely brilliant. The ending was kinda disappointing for me though. Well, can't expect a plain sort of ending from an EVA fic after all. Great job.

eh...geat?

excellent story, freaky as hell but still excellent :D

-spoilers-

So, Shinji and Asuka are trapped in a repeating cycle of realities. Shinji created these worlds to make Asuka happy (post 3rd impact world sucks?), but they keep figuring out what happened and restarting the cycle. The people they interact with are all people they met, and only know things Shinji and Asuka know. Since their memories are missing from ages 14 to 18, Shinji and Asuka are probably 17-18 in the 'real' world, which they are returning to ("Maybe now we can let everything go back to normal.")

How close am I?

amazing story it blow my mind, great job. awesome fic loved it

this fic was awesome, confusing and mind twisting, but awesome none the less. i liked the way you made kaji seem too be the father figure, i always liked him better than gendo. good job.

You are a very talented writer, have you ever considered this as a career? The reason i came to this story is because i was revisiting an old favorite, which was Shinji Grows Up and i decided to check out if u had another story, u did, and it was equally as great which further solidified my belief that you should be a writer.

Nice story

Few typos

Rating: A-

That... was wonderful. A story I actually read through and enjoyed. It somewhat reminds me of the original anime, but maybe that's just me. Keep up the good work.