Very romantic and true of how they started out, sizing each other up and thinking, "No, I can't be attracted to..."

Thank heavens they got over that and thank heavens you could see under the surface.

Thanks for sharing this.

T.

This is absolutely lovely and poignant and beautiful. You've been able to capture them so clearly. I love that this moment is one of vulnerability for Adam. You've stripped away his facade and left us with who he actually is, how he actually feels.

It's in reading pieces like this one that I am truly glad fanfiction exists.

~OSuzanne

This is so beautiful and so natural. Beautiful, beautiful, piece.

Yes, indeed, it is Laura and Bill... and yet, not LauraBill.

Wow. This was a beatuifully written moment in time. Very nicely done!

You wrote a beautiful moment that show us so much in so few words...of of the what ifs and maybes...lovely, just lovely

Nope. He's not a mystery to her at all. :)

Excellent.

xxoo

Kimberley

Amanda asked me to read this and i was blown away so sweet please post it at the BSGShippers group it's mine and i just love your work... Excellent...V

Oh this is so good. you should check out Vicky Ryan's BSGShippers group at yahoo... we love Adama/Roslin Stories and this is brilliant...more please...