this is the third time im reading this it is one of my favourite fanfictions

this was really good! thanks so much for the read!

Hi there! I just finished reading your fic. I couldn't stop reading, it was very good and I enjoyed it greately.
Really thought it'd be a very tragic thing with that begining, but I'm happy it wasn't.
I liked the way you wrote the characters, so I'll definetelly check if there's something more of this fandom in your profile.
Honestly, I'm very happy I stumbled in this fic. You did it very, very well. Thank you!

Just finished this in one go and I love it so much.

I managed to read 8 chapters in no time because your story is no good. I can't even stop.

Thank you I love your story

I like Honda here ... I donno why but I tend to enjoy any interaction between minor characters like Honda, Anzu and so on and major charachters important to the plot like Mokoba, kaiba, Yug, etc.

I love ur writing style and your story so far is very interesting and the best part is " no uneeded duels just because it is yugioh"

This was phenomenal. You are one of my favorite authors on this site- so I am always so excited when I find that you have written stories for my current fandom obsessions. Now it's time for me to read all of your yugioh fics!

I really like how you included Hanasaki in this! Everyone forgets about him, even though he was cool! Also, I can't even imagine Mokuba with blonde hair! It makes me want to draw him with dyed hair! He would look so KAWAII! This is one of the best Fanfictions I have ever read!

Kyaaa! Mokuba darling is so clever! But... SETO!

Mokuba isn't dead?! OHMYGOSH! YYEEEESSS! But still. Dat part with Seto wearing the two pedants... That got me.

I was bored, and pulled out a Fanfiction I had bookmarked a while ago, prepared for some light reading... IwillnotcryIwillnotcryIwillnotcry... *Cries* Why is it Mokuba?! My darling Mokie-kun!

X-parrot, you are such a talented writer! I really enjoyed reading your story. I don't often read very long fics, but this one had me so hooked I couldn't stop! Thanks for the adventure!

This story was wonderful beginning to end, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

I love how you characterize everyone. I love the Kaiba bro's determination, Mokuba's brilliance, Yugi and Yami's perceptiveness, and the rest of the gang's resolve and helpfulness. The tension between Kaiba and Yugi and co is still there, but I love how the Kaiba's are not alone. And those two detectives are after my own heart. Such perceptiveness, such depth that few OC's have. The sheer amount of detail amazes me; how you divided hacking styles down to personality, the characters' mental processes, tactics. Absolutely brilliant.