| Reviews for 8:33 PM |
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   Flower573 chapter 1 . 4/25/2019 This is so cute |
| nozomi-NN-chan chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 Omg this is just so cute and lovely. |
| Lily chapter 1 . 5/31/2018 :3 |
| Err-Error404U-UsernameNotFound chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Adorable |
| hgjasdf chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 short but very sweet and interesting use of the time! well written! :) |
| DrewMayShipper chapter 1 . 6/16/2011 This is a rather late review, but better late than never...? :D? In any case, this was absolutely adorable and I loved the timing and pace all throughout it, which was surprising because I thought it would annoy me, but no, you pulled it off brilliantly and the ending was adorable and my thoughts are all over the place because this was that cute, but ugh basically, this is wonderful and amazing and you did a fantastic job. It was also very original and UGH SO CUTE I'm going to stop now before I write you an essay! |
| AmitraDay chapter 1 . 3/28/2011 That is the cutest thing I have ever read. ADORABLE! 3 |
| Favillesco chapter 1 . 1/7/2011 This is so, this is oh so very osom. |
| crossmeetsarrows chapter 1 . 9/11/2010 one of the simple yet awesome fics I've ever read! great job! :D |
| nostratic chapter 1 . 3/13/2010 aha that was cute :) well done |
| Crimson Masquerade chapter 1 . 3/10/2010 I love this fic so much, it is not only funny and well-written, but it shows just how natural SasuNaru is. Which is why I like the pair so much in the first place-they just fit together perfectly, Naruto with his goofy, loud and endearing antics, and Sasuke with his cool and collected air, which hides the fact that he really does care. This was so great and I loved it! c: |
| Askin chapter 1 . 10/5/2009 *fangirl squeal* Aw that was so cute! I quite enjoyed it, great read _ ~the dreamer |
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 8/20/2009 Aw this was super kawaii. |
| vernajast chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 Aw, sweetness! HA! And I finished reading it at 8:33… O_o That's a little disconcerting. If I were superstitious, hehe. Anyway, yes, sweetness! I really enjoyed this little insight into the characters and just…well the whole thing really rang true. I liked it immensely! Oh, and I found your story by QuestofDreams' rec list. :D |
| Kitty Meow chapter 1 . 3/20/2009 Uwa wow this fic is so amazing I love how each incident is measured out in steps of time, each flowing seamlessly into the next. The flashes of their day fit so perfectly together, like the piece of a puzzle that is never quite complete. And I love how at the end, Naruto's perception of time slowly fades as his mind becomes preoccupied with Sasuke Really, just very very lovely Hehe The characterizations are also done superbly. Sasuke is his typical snarky self and Naruto remains a hyperactive vaguely annoying character that you just can't help but love. And beneath it all, is that frisson of attraction and affection. Everything together - the composition, the characterization, the tempo - all of it comes together to make a superb piece of fiction I'll definitely be adding this story to my favs! |
