I felt soooo bad for raven! Getting frostbite and going unconscious!? I also liked the part where bb reminded raven that it was eight in the working and she already had her powers after she kissed him twice. That probs means that they were good to kiss. Great and cute story!

Spook cute I love it so much keep up the good work

NICE ICE

I think it was very smart but you need to include more detail

Awesome story.

perfect story

Yay I like it. Raven had her powers back for two hours now lol and she still haven't blown anything up now lol awesome!

potato

A fun, entertaining vignette. I think Raven buckled a little too easily. Merely being powerless wouldn't make her personality so weak. One technical point - frostbite occurs when your flesh freezes and dies. In Jump City, it's not going to get that cold in October. Further, Raven's symptoms are of hypothermia, rather than frostbite. And it's more likely to be dangerous than frostbite at those temperatures. If you do another edit, you might want to consider changing her illness from frostbite to hypothermia.

cool!

Do it, do it! Write another; this fanfiction was well made! It would be a crime not to continue!

lol bb being bb.

so cute! ]

Very cute!

:)

~Rae

wow. that was good.