This fic was onother great read. I loved it.

So beautiful

I like it and all, but Kimiko seemed out of character and there were a few grammar mistakes. The beginning sounds rushed. It could use more detail. Other than that, it sounds like an interesting story.

I pretty much enjoyed this fanfic! :D The actions happened a bit too fast though, If you had extended them I'd be the luckiest fangirl in the world right now.

do a sequel! this was bloody brillant!

Lol yea, Omi would be the first to walk in x3

you've kept their characters well, props 4 that! :D

Chase, you sleezy, chessy Jerk! You took jJack out and replaced him with yourself? *is talking about the ending of chapter 7*

OH! Kimiko is going to kill! XD

Hey your story was awesome. you really should post a sequel about when there older or sumat. lol really great story keep up the good work buh-bye xoxoxo

OMG I read this fanfic 2 years ago and it's still awesome!

This was the first Jack/Kimiko story I ever read and I must say, it was excellent. I enjoyed it a lot. Grea job.

Boy, have you ever got a lot of reviewers. Do all of them give positive reviews?

EW! is right. That was so sick and yet it makes for a great fic.

Okay...deep breath...I'm done being mad. I'm sorry I yelled at you. YOUR STORY IS GREAT!

Akimina123! AKIMINA123!you even added supa-nova-101 and Fanficluv7Inu! ADD ME!

Gr, do I have to spell it out for you? You added Joey and Master Monk BUT YOU STILL FORGET ME!