If only James was not a coward this story will have a happy end. Cindy is better off without him because he will always be on the run and needing to be saved. Brave hearts stick around. So farewell James.

One thing that I really like about you is that your writing is realistic. You realize that things in life don't always have happy endings. Some fanfic readers might not like that, but I respect that.

I can't wait to start reading your books! I can tell your writing is improving with each story I read. :)

this is really good! I've been reading a few of your stories and so fa r

i like this one best!

*tears streaming down my cheek*

this almost made me Ed up crying. good job:)

great writing, loved it.

love it! please make more stories!

That is so sad and beautiful! I loved it!

so sad i nearly cried but i held it back!(brings out tissue and starts crying.)poor jimmy he'll never know how cindy feels.

That was really sweet! He knows just what to say to make a girl melt

But i still dont like him

O.O...Jimmy actually takes time from his inventions to write a heartfelt mushfest like this?

OMG. That was so beautiful. You write the best stories. (Cries)

beautiful. Simply beautiful. But in my opinion, make it so Jimmy has to move soon, so he wants to write a letter to Cindy. But good thoughts.

Your story was very straight and to the point, and an accurate monologue of Jimmy's feelings. I would like to see a rebuttal or reponse from Cindy to this and perhaps see a happy ending. You would be ill-advised to end this story here.

aw! angsty but cute! *tear,tear* *claps* bravo!