Awwwwwww so sweet

Hi,

Ah well, as much I've enjoyed this story(besides the reasons I'll talk about below), I have to agree with Blue Star Galaxy.

To start off, I looked up that review expecting to see something like "You suck" or "Stop writing". Instead I see a well cited review, plus an "I love you!". I would've been thankful for that, and taken a second look at my writing.

For you to be offended by the fact that they said that, and that they made their opinion stated seems a little immature, not to mention arrogant. The review button is not made to exclusivley stroke your ego.

Also, after looking at all 86 reviews of this story, hers/his was the only remotely negative one, if it was even that negative at all.

Is that what offended you? The fact that someone took the time to say something different than, "Oh dear god, this is simply marvelous, please keep writing"?

Now, to be blunt, it looks like you didn't take as much time as you should have to look at your writing for little mistakes. ex:

"Well go one," she said in a motherly fashion, "He tires easily so keep all conversation short." (chapter 6)

I'm sure you meant, "Go on" not "Go 1"

"Warren is not a cruel person. Even if he cannot feel the same way for you that you feel for him does not mean that he will hate you. Just breath." (Chapter 6)

I'm betting you meant breathe.

Breathe verb

Breath Noun

Also, the dialogue seems too mature for kids their age, and background.

If it were say, Draco Malfoy talking to his parents, I'd be more inclined to accept this. However, it isn't, and I'm not.

Despite all this, I liked your story, though I won't be looking up the sequel. I hope your writing and proof-reading continue to come along.

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Insanitydonewell

Wow, this story ended with a cliff hanger. LOL Off to the sequel!

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this story. i think you portrayed all of the characters really well. Leyla's acceptance was totally realistic, in my opinion, and I really liked how Warren's reaction wasn't all lovey-dovey in return all at once. I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel!

I have nothing against you, but I can't say I like this story. It is written in a very childish manner. Also, the characters are OOC. In addition to that, the events are too idealistic to be seen as plausible situations. I'm sorry to leave a critical review.

I read ‘Children of the Vills’ and thought it was excellent, so thought I’d check out your other work and I must say I was pleasantly surprised to find this was not only another well-written piece but a well-written *slashy* piece! Oh, and the angst! It was really heartbreaking - I was so pleased when Warren regained consciousness. Am now off to read ‘Now What’ - can’t wait!

this is a great story

wow. I don't know if it's my allergies or this fic, but I've been crying for almost the whole thing. Nice job.

YOu made me cry during part of this story. That in itself is rare. An absolutely wonderful story. I can't wait to read the next one.

Hey! this is a good story...im really not a fan of the will/warren pairing but it was well written. Good job and i'm glad Warren didn't die! (lol he's my favorite) Later!

AH! HOOD STORY! PLEASE MAKE SEQUAL SOON! WAI! SO GOOD..

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU VERY VERY MUCH! AND I LOVE YOUR STORY! WE! YOURS IS THE FIRST SHOUNEN-AI IN THE CATEGORY! I SALUTE YOU! YOU ARE MY HERO!

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I LOVE YOU!

That storry was good. I liked it very much keep up the good job.

Gasp...splutter...WHADDAYA MEAN "THE END!" !

*rereads author's note*

Oh. Please please please tell me that this story is coming out SOON! I can't stand the tension!

What a nice surprise to get on after a rather nasty first day at college (read: orientation sucks) and see the last chapter of this up!

Actually, I really do like where you left it off. It's nice and final, a really great end to a really great story! I love you! And I'm praying you have that story up soon!

Thank you!

I knew Warren wouldn't hate him. I can't wait for the next story and know if they hook up or just stay friends. I'm really just hoping for the former. I like this pairing better than Sirius/Remus even though I love Sirius/Remus together. Great story!~