The spelling. Oh my god. The spelling. How is it so poor? I feel like I’m reading a child’s diary.

Why is the spelling getting worse with each chapter?

I’ve been trying to work through all of the grammatical errors, but I can’t take it anymore. If this is going to stay up on the site, it needs to be edited, badly.

.comment I wrote previously was meant for this chapter. (About inuyasha wearing the same clothes for 3 days now. Same clothes from his date with kagome

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You do realize inuyasha is Still wearing the same clothes from his and kagome's date, right? Like this is the 3rd day with the same outfit. Plus he got in a fight with kouga on the 2nd day. Unless a a change of new clothes just magically appear lol.

Did ya forget inuyasha 's ride is still outside waiting for him? Lol
Poor miroku. Maybe he got the hint and left already

I dislike Sesshoumaru/Rin romance pairings, she is his ward (adopted daughter).

I am looking forward to it :D

please continue. And you never finished Kagome's story about Kagome's past with Naraku. And have Inu go nuts when she told him what Naraku did to her back then. Anywho It's still an awesome story And I'm hoping you give them a baby girl. :)

Plz do the sequel

Hi. I liked your story. But it was too forward. Like Inuyasha and Kagome didn't even know each other that closely, but still she rubs his ears in the car while going to the movie. Again, at the movie you should have portrayed Kagome brave as in real she is. It was too much to see her bury her head in Inuyasha’s chest
Other than that great story.

So what is the next part

A nice Fanfiction. I like you fanfiction. I have Read The fanfiction Two x. Please wrote Mord Fanfictions

nosebleed much

Isn't that a break in