Beautiful.

R.I.P
Sen

This was interesting, but it almost felt as if the wedding part (the second half of the epilogue) was rushed. It would have been nice to see it slowed slightly, but overall I rather liked the first one as well as this one.

I'm not sure I buy Ozai's acceptance of defeat, but apart from that the story was great. Obviously I liked Katara and Zuko's relationship, but I almost enjoyed Zuko and Sokka's even more, in the sense that it was great to watch them go from hating each other to kinda being bros. That was great. Nice work!

Ending felt a little rushed but it was a good story .my journey ends now

Well done. You've completed the checklist for: How to create a (Crappy) Self Insert Power Phantasy Villain Original character:
1.- Make her powerful. Very powerful. Or give him/her a shit load of skills ot make it look powerful.
2.- Make other characters look helpless or useless around her. Especially, but not limited, to fight scenes.
3.- Make her as arrogant, irreverent, self absorbed, pretentious and everything you could possibly think of to make it clear that she has a big ego.
4.- While doing number 4 make sure the characters in the story find a way to despise the OC.
5.- Your OC CAN'T lose. Even when she's the one who retreats or runs away, you must make it clear that it was still her victory.
6.- After you make it clear that the heroes can't possibly hate the villain OC even more, bring up a scene where one of the heroes makes a connection with the villain. The more out of the blue the better.
7.- Reveal that the villain isnt bad at all. And reveal a secret background for her involving as much parents as you can in a 'tragic' backstory that just BEGS for the audience's simpathy.

Yes. I know I'm being to harsh and whiny. But dammit man. It was already bad enough all the glorification you where giving Sen in the previous chapters, but now she has more protagonism than all other characters combined.

Why do I have the feelind Sen is going to turn out to be a tragic misunderstood anti heroine?... Shit.

Wow. Like... I dont know what to say. I've never seen such a good stoey been nearly killed by one sinfle character. Im sorry. Sen is hands down the most boring and pretentious OC that I've ever seen. Not to mention over powered to the point is not even funny. And this chapter just took things to far.

Why was she even allowed to get inside Bumi's palace? Let alone boss around the city guards. How come she can keep up with the gang when they can fly? Even worst, reach their destination before thwy do despite the fact that she is clearly doing other stuff of her own and other jobs foe Zaoh. And the hell is she walking and scheming happy as a butterfly when she just recibed a fire blow that half consumed all her clothes and melted her knife?

Im sorry. But ever since she joined the stoey is going downhill. And watching Zuko get beaten over and over is really getting old to.

Although I doubt the war would just end like that the story was very well written but I was expecting like a marital and passionate kiss at the end between Zuko and Katara but it's yours not mine

huh i actually like the way the war ended, its not realistic but i just wish i could see it happen?
Maybe someone could write it?

Oh my gosh! These were all so amazing... I think I finished them all in just over 24 hours... D definately what I was looking for!

Great story!

Thank you a lot!. Your wonderful fic has helped to mend my Zutara heart shattered by the end of the series. I was bitter for a long time and survived on a Zutara fics here in fanfiction. Your fic had romance, adventure, everything!
I'm grateful, really. You don't know how seriously bitter I was to see my Zutara dreams vanishing with my own eyes. I couldn't understand how they turn a blind eye to a fantastic pairing, but whatever. Your fics made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside and that feeling is better that begrudgingly and bitter resignation. Thank you!

AWESOME!

Loved your story! However, Katara is a little too out of character here, too weak and constantly needing protection. Also, marriage? Wasn't she fifteen...?
Well, enough with the bad mouthing... Nice story!
Fly on :)