Good story

Great ending. Loved it.

Aww, what an adorable chapter. I loved how Mary finally told Danny how she felt and why she gave him back the ring. Yay, now they're together, about time. This REALLY needs to happen on the show. Please update soon.

Hi

Love the story!Please continue, I'm very curious to see what happens next.

Keep up the good work!

I love this story. :) I just wish the show had

dealt with Larry's death in a similar fashion. I guess I've gotta pick my battles, where Dary is concerned, right? Anyway, I can't wait for the next installment.

keep up the great work. i can't wait to read the next part.

i like where this is goin! u've been very good about not being cheesy.. keep it up!

cute

This is great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

you have to continue this! I can't wait to see what happens between mary and danny... I hope that they get back together! Please update soon!

I'm a sucker for a Dary romance, and this captured me too. I love it. Keep it coming, that's all I can say.

Great update Dawn-Marie! I love it! Can't wait for the next installment and if you nedd anymore feedback, you can email or send the next chapter over MSN to me if ya want!

Jena

Great story! I'm enjoying the tension.

Oh yeah. Jake got some competition!

I can't believe we have to wait a couple of weeks to read the next installment. I've got a couple of crocodile tears falling down my cheeks right now . . . it was amazing. Please post as soon as you can when you get back home. Great job! :)