Is her name Amurila or Arriella?

This story is a little hard to follow if you haven't read the books/seen the movies recently. Otherwise, it was... okay.

Yeah, it was a SEVERE disappointment for her "introduction" and the changes she SHOULD have caused at least indirectly to be non-existent. This is turning into nothing more than a canon rehash so far.

That was interesting despite the severe lack of changes from canon as a result of Hedwig being Arriella (which was boring) but you pretty much botched her "introduction." "Cool, a miracle, now let's get back to work." was basically all that happened courtesy of Dumbledore. Boring and illogical, that is. Harry just found out his pet was an animagus. A FEMALE animagus. Who was apparently supposed to be dead. Dumbledore is NOT just going to throw that off like that. No one is, that doesn't make any sense at all.

Ignore the hell out of the retarded reviews. I LOVE THIS STORY!

you need to get your facts straight, you cannot block an unforgivable curse with a protego. im done reading this book for now. i hope you change things to make it better.

Skye should be Human now right?

cool story

brilliant

There where some things I didn't like with the story but I liked reading it. 3

Uhh... Let me start out by saying that I like the idea behind this story.

there are only two things I think you could improve on a bit, tone/mood, and logistics.

You have a way of writing that makes the story more of a report than a tale; this happens then this then this then this, I think you might do quite a bit better if you used dialogue to show people's thoughts, tone and concrete scenery to reinforce the ideas behind your story, rather than just telling it in the frank, cool voice you now use.

In addition, there are a few things you may want to consider, like the idea of blocking an unforgivable curse, which in this universe isn't possible with a simple protego sheild.

Great story, but it gets a bit confusing in the later chapters.

SEQUAL!-Waves hans insanely- I await your words.

-bows- This was an awsome fanfic, beggar sirius had to die, also, Hedwig, Dumbledore(although I saw it comming) Dobby, Fred! (sniffles I love the twins! T0T)Remus, and Tonks!T_T

Yeah, I was upset at that in the book.

-eyes tear up- Gomen! -wipes eyes- Everytime I get to that scene in the book, I get teary eyed, Why did she have to kill him off! I loved that guy! have you read the final book? I HATED the way she got rid of some of my favorite characters!

To tell you the truth dear, Id love to read the whole story if you still have it. Its wonderful and I really like it!