That's cute and sweet regardless of what later becomes of them lol.

AW! Little Ron! I can just picture that now! how cute?

...Great story by the way. lol.

Nice and fluffy. I like it.

cute and very original. :-) You've given me many ideas. I wish I were creative but you know, I might just be able to come up with something other than my usual garbage now. :-)

I like it! Not only is the story good, but I like the author's note and warning. Bravo.

That made me laugh! I worked at a Summer Camp last year, kids ages 4-12, and they say the funniest things sometimes...

omg, what are u thinking, gay ron and harry? u r sick and twisted. i mean look at characters who really are gay and write a story about them, not a story of characters who we know arent gay. Other than that, its okay. The people are way out of character though.