| Reviews for My Everything |
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  dolphinred chapter 9 . 12/31/2016 Great story keep up the good work |
| dxprincess chapter 9 . 4/10/2010 love it is it over |
 flowerypetal chapter 9 . 3/31/2009 really good story. is this the end? |
| jessicam242 chapter 9 . 1/19/2009 Please update mamoru is so sweet! |
| Ceralyn chapter 9 . 5/13/2007 very interesting. i always wanted to know more. but was that the end or did you just give up on this fic or what? plus why what happened to brian? did he suddenly disappear or what? and too many important events happen that we only hear mentioned in dialogue but don't experience. also did mamoru ever get brian back? he seemed so nonchalant about it when he told usagi that anne didn't "mean anything by it". also what happened between brian and usagi last year? too many questions left unasnwered! driving me insane! i need to know! still, pretty good. i liked it. you might wanna finish it. |
| Lady Razeli chapter 9 . 3/7/2007 Great story, but was that the end or what? I'm confused. If it isn't the end I hope you update soon. |
| XxBlownKissesxX chapter 9 . 12/4/2006 Why did Andrew's name change to Motoki all of a sudden? Also why aren't these cops pressing usagi about what happen with the accident with Brian. In addition, what exactly happened with her and Brian? Also you did not mention anything about hospital visits |
| BloomAmber chapter 9 . 10/14/2006 yeah!That is so cute*Starts daydreaming*please keep going I just love this story so much! |
| Pamela chapter 9 . 6/26/2006 oh that's so cute :) |
| supersaiyanx chapter 9 . 6/15/2006 wow i really like this fic, you are good! I hope that you have written more chapters and that you update soon! Thanks for the read...so far and don't forget to UPDATE ! |
| TropicalRemix chapter 8 . 2/25/2006 Why did you stop updating this fic? I really like it. I hope you continue with it. I'll be waiting. |
| NeoQueenSerenity0289 chapter 9 . 12/10/2005 *sniff sniff* sorry i get all weapy at love sotries *snif sniff* i lov this ur doign great iunderstand about the story when |
| Little TinkerBell Girl chapter 9 . 12/3/2005 This is pretty good. I think you are moving a little too fast. Well at first youwere then you slowed now you're going fast . You also have to explain things better. Like about the picture that was really confusing. Also sometimes the things in your story dont' match up right. Like when she asked him why he wouild come and visit her when he had been visiting her like everyday. This is still a good story if it is your first. I'm not sure if it is over yet but if it is it's good. If it's not Update soon! |
| Deadly Diva chapter 9 . 11/27/2005 Okay, this is the last bit of wisdom that I will imopart on you. Please cease and desist with the author's notes in the middle of the chapter. The interrupt the reader and doesn't give them the opportunity to draw their own conclusions. You don't have to tell the reader that you are going somewhere. It is assumed that you are taking whatever it is since you are writing a story. Deadly Diva |
| Deadly Diva chapter 8 . 11/27/2005 This is another improvement. You've added some non-dialogue elements that give the reader a bit of insight. I am pleasesd. Deadly Diva |
