Aw this was sad! It reminded me of the scene in Gone with the Wind when Rhett and Scarlet face a tragedy and all Rhett wants is for her to call his name when she's in distress but he leaves just before she does.

Awww. I always thought Aragorn and Eowyn would make a great couple because she loved him before she knew who he was.

do more chapters

I think it's awesome!

Very sweet and touching though I think it would even better if written in the past tense,as is more usual for though, I liked it.I will check out more of your work.

Aw, what a sweet story. Kind of like the opposite of what happened in the extended edition of Return of the King, if you've seen that.

But overall, a nice job. I really enjoyed it.