I think this story is totally original! I havn't read the whole thing yet but i'm loving it so far! Publishing would be a good idea! Ya never know until ya try. IF they send it back, it will probably have some advice come with it as well. Go for it! You are a talented writer and have alot of potential!

pianoluv

This is a pretty good story although some parts seemed a bit rushed and others too long. With lots of revising (and possibly shortening) this story might be "privately published" as in passed on in your family and friends. However, there are many traces of other stories in this one, where you have to change. (ideas from Ella Enchanted, etc...)

good job and keep writing!

AW WOW that was so damn good! I lurved thyis story! And I wish it didn't have to end, but all good things do have to! It was phenomenamly brilliante! Well done!

Wow. I can't believe it's over! This story was so unbelieably gorgeous. I love how you gave both Snow White and Evil Queen this true characters. Redynvre went through so much in her life, and I think it's all hitting me at once with this last chapter. It's just so sad, her life. But she did so much in the end, and she learned so much! (Sorry if I'm gusy; it's finals and I'm over-emotional. But this story deserves it.) I also love how complex you made the story. Just gorgeous.

This epilogue was perfect. Fechin's point of view (whom, yes, I do love) was a very nice touch, as he has all this innocence and lack of knowledge concerning all that went on; it ends the story with a different feel. I also like how you kept it simple, for the ending. Very good way to end it.

*tosses roses*

*twitch* What the hell did you just do? *twitch*

I like Fechin, though, from what you've shown of him. He's good. Fechin is good.

What did you to Maeve?

I like your new name, by the way.

What an... odd turn of events... Maeve is good? Wow, wierd... OK...

Good chapter, love that it isn't the end, and this better not be either! Can't wait for more, p.s what was the third gift? Im guessing she hasn't used it yet.

...-_-

Okay better stop doing that...

Lasarina is cool with Radyvnre, but is this the end? I hope not! : You didn't say it was, so I'm guessing theres more? I bet there is!

So, update soon?

Is that the end? Wow, that was good! I am so proud of you! It was amazingly brilliant! One tiny thing for if you ever re-write this... When you introduce Lasarina, she tells Redynvre that she is the illigitimate daughter of the King... So, she already knows? Erm, yeah, sorry to point that out! BUt apart from tht, it was bloody amazingly briilaint! LOVED IT

Okay, so I was wrong about Lasarina; I suppose I didn't expect Redynvre to come and stop her and promote her. Yay for Redynvre! She is turning nice again! I really liked this chapter. You covered so much material, but I have a feeling, especially with the baby's birth at the end (Snow White's "prince" dare I say?) that you need a lead-in chapter. But this was good. It seems like the mood of the story is flashing upwards again. I'm now most excited for an update.

yey great chapter as usual! but i thought lasarina knew she was the kings daughter... did i just imagine tht? hm nyhoo good chapter! wellen donen! lol

Redynvere, it's okay, hon! It worked! Wow, I thought I'd never be so excited to see Snow White bite the apple.

And Lasarina... why do I have a horrible feeling she is going to do something incredibly dimwitted?

Ooh... me liketh this chapter much! I love how nasty she was in the beginning. Well, not nasty persay. She seemed mostly distracted. And she has every right to be so. I love how the potion turned out. So... what will Eirwen think?

who is it, who is it? tell me! in the nxt chapter, which u will write now! update son please i cnt wait to see wat happens

Hahaha! Maeve managed to piss Keir off! Mwahaha! Well, I'm glad I"m allowed to like her, because I think Miss Maeve is my favorite character.

o no, she might kill her? or what? argh! loved the chapter! very very very much please please please update soon! soon soon soon soon!