That was lovely - really, really nice. There's nothing wrong with a good bit of fluff sometimes! Your dialogue in particular is written very naturally, particularly the interactions between the couples - you captured the essence of Arthur and Molly perfectly! Speaking as a Brit though, I would have to say that some of it sounds a little American to me. I suppose it's incredibly difficult to write 'Britishly' if you're not - I know I'm hopeless at writing anything involving any other nationality - but if you want something to work on then it's that. Otherwise, I absolutely loved it!

that was so cute! and very realistic. u got the characteristics down very well and it was an adorable story. i like how u put i the part about the war in Iraq... nost stories that take place in the Muggle world dont even mention that even though its a huge thing thats going on. it shows that we have bad things happening here just like in the magical world.

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Aw that was sweet. I liked it!

I nearly cried. This was gorgeous.

I loved this fanfic. I love seeing hermione and ron at her house just finally falling into each other's arms. I give it a great ten sparkling stars.

That was very cute! AWW!

I really enjoyed reading that story. It showed about Hermione's past with living in a muggle town and showing everything to Ron. This was one of the best stories I've ever read!

good story. Ron is quite out of character though. Hermione was good though.

You should have them fighting and then just have him push her against a wall and start making out with her, and then he will get all red and stuipd

ah I like it. You did a good job!

wow what a fantastic story i love Ron being in the muggle world i thought that was quite funny. and how it lead up to the kiss and admitting and everything that was fantastic. you should write another story.

it was nice, bit sad. i liked the ending thing with hermiones parents. my mom often plays that song by louis amstrong- what a wonderful world, and i always tease her about it, so it was a bit funny reading it, but nice still.:)