10/10

This was absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed it very much. It was sweet and you stayed so true to the character’s personalities. Wonderful piece; by far, the best prideshipping story I have ever read. It’s also so nostalgic for me because I havd not read a pride fanfic in quite the while.
Keep up the great work! I would love to read more of your pride fanfics. :D

awesome!~~~~~~~

This is good, a heck of a lot! A bit confusing, but also really damn good! I'm sorry my review is short, but... I just wanted to tell you that.

Wow. This was written so amazingly! And you got their personalities spot on!
Oh, and that kiss at the end! Love it! So love it!
;3

Its amazing :) keep writing I love your style

Ha! Yes! I loved it! :D

Wow ._.

As in wow, that blew my mind, WOW. You're a really amazing writer.

That was definitely good,and I sure hope that sequel is up by now. I shall go stalk.

Pretty interesting can you do a Yami No Yuugi and Black Magician humor anghast romance I couldn't care less

This was really an amazing read! You captured both personalities very well, and you created just the right sense of angst, content, and love at the end. I especially like some of the lines you delivered here, especially the one, "Perhaps, though, conversation was just a game of even greater importance - or was it simply one with much more at stake?" - that line I think really defines this relationship. Anyhoo, I love this pairing, and this story, and I beg you to pleeease write a sequel!

~GunSniper64

This was your first...? Wow, you're good. :O like, really good, and i mean it.

loved the whole thing to bits, but especially the end and i love the name, im glad i took french for once :P

I'm sorry I'm incoherent about this, but I have nothing to say except that it's perfect and in-character and hot and and oh, I cannot possibly articulate how much I would love for you to write the sequel, even though you're probably completely uninterested by now.

This is beautiful.

WOAH! I love this! You kept them both remarkably in character, so well done. I love your descriptions and the way it's like Yami is trying to patch Kaiba up. I kinda suck at reviewing, but this is amazing. I'd say carry it on buy I can see the sequel in your library. Bravo ;)

I have to admit, the beginning confused me greatly because I wasn't sure what exactly happened to Seto...but that's most likely ignorance on my part. Everything else though is quite...interesting. Everything that happened was a shock to me and it unfolded rather nicely; both pleasant and yet unnerving. I'm not sure how to explain it, but everything that happened was in character and it left me thirsting for me. I'll be looking forward to the sequel (:

I kinda thought Kaiba would be the aggressive one, but still a cool story! Also loved how Yami saved him and got a kiss in the end.