Interesting...

Whoa! This. was. awesome.
I would have never thought of this, but it was incredible!

That was...wow. A new look on it for sure. At first I was like...wow. Lily is doing all this for Harry. And then, woah...Lily Death Eater? Woah. My mind is blown. Good Job though.

wow, it was so... unexpected. It was amazingly dark and bitter but I love the way you portrayed the characters. I'm in awe. It is something so original and different. I'm amazed.

What an interesting twist. I can't say I like the idea of Lily being the one to betray them all - in fact, I very nearly loathe her in your story, although I understand her motives... kind of.

But I love, love, love this idea of them all being together. I love how James belongs to them and not Lily, how they all live in that kind of four-way-marriage. That's how I imagine it, too... they are all so incredibly close, only faithful to each other, and just together. So I really like the description of that relationship.

This is so... interesting. Really good.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

They should have rememered that.

:)

first dark!Lily I read that seems real...I lvoed it...it was awesome! )! great job!

wonderfully written. It was angsty with a hint of funnyness.

That was...strange. Well written, but...strange. Keep up the good work.

strange. i liked it.

That was good. Angsty and funny. I loved this line: She knew that in the last year, Severus Snape had been learning how to become one as well, telling himself that one day Remus Lupin would fall in love with him, and he could be there for him on the full moons as well.

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wow thats is really...wow

LOVE IT

its soo good i dont even know where to start

. awsome story!

Nice

Oh, that’s quite a lovely little heretic theory you’ve got there.

And I must say that this part of Lily Evans is rather appealing, in a strange sort of way. A dark Lily… cool, maybe that’s what really happened…?

Good lord, I love this twist. Brilliant. Utterly brilliant. The idea that Lily manipulated them all makes me smile. Of course it isn't a nice smile, but who cares? Strangely I can see someone doing this, expecially a woman who knows her husband will never be hers. Scorned lover and all that. Fantastic.