Reviews for It's an Odd world after all |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Intresting, I hope you pick back up on this story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that an intresting twist on the pulsations. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this is a pretty cool story and i cant wait for more!_! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a long chapter Did you forget about it or give up on it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Kia... i wonder what's wrong great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Story is Gr8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still like this fic but i hate that cliffhanger...well its a cliffhanger to me cause it raises ?s and if you bite hard enough to get through the com to me than i say you bite way too hard...nvm my reamble...pls update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luv this chap.! And when i put it makes me think, i meant that in a good way. Like it makes me think or ponder about all the qustions in this story. Me thinking is a good thing. (as one of my friends would say or most of them)Making me think about a story or ponder about one is a good thing cuz sometimes i don't have to ponder about stories cuz i can figuer out what will happen next and how it will end. Any story that i can't figuer out or get at least a bit about what will happen is a good story. Really that can go for any one. But one of my friends just says that too much. Anyway awsome chap.! UPDATE SOON OR ILL KILL YOU! lol jk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great story can't wait till next chapter ! And now that I can *adds to favs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is a great story. _ can't wait to read the next chap ;o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow another good chapter. I'm beginning to wonder if they'll ever solve this problem. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME CHAPTER! PLEASE update ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() like i said in my last review box-blocks and you really need to include the return to the past thing cuz it just doesnt make any sense to me without it... sissy healing automaticly and Kia having gashes on her arms... if you use the return to the past then everything would turn back 2 normal... sissy obsessing over ulrich while he drools over yumi, odd eating alot and also drooling for kia and Aelita and Jeremie talking 24/7 on the computer and the pulsations that Aelita is feeling from Kia would disappear. THIS IS NOT A FLAME! I just realized all of these things while reading your story but your story is really good... filled with lots of action which i cant even write keep writing and update soon -Vic- |
![]() ![]() ![]() i realized that you said you were new to Code Lyoko. Just a little info about it that i caught in your writing. The tubes that trasport the gang to and from Lyoko are called scanners not towers. towers are the long columns that Aelita enters to activate the return to the past senario. The box like monsters are called blocks instead of box and when Jeremie does the return to the past thing... its meant so that no one knows about what happened, so Xanas attacks have been erased from peoples memories, thats why they do it. THIS IS NOT A FLAME! Just info that you mistakened in ur story. Everything else was ok. im glad sissys in the hosplital. she deserves it so im with Odd, she should of looked where she was going. Ulrich shouldnt have to feel sorry for her. FUCK SISSY lol jk jk had to write it Keep Writing and Update Soon -Vic- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch, poor Kia! Lyoko was weird, I like fics that happen lke that, where Lyoko is messed upbig time. Anyways, update soon! |