Reviews for Broken |
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DayWrecker chapter 1 . 9/29/2017 More, please. |
DayWrecker chapter 6 . 2/19/2017 Love this story and, of course, Entreri. Kudos on a well written story, though I wish you would finish it! |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2016 This is amazing, and a wonderful story line; I can't wait till the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/18/2015 PLEASE continue PLEASE oh i beg you it is so good and has so much potential please? :) |
general zargon chapter 6 . 11/30/2010 I hope you don't torture Aari too much, he sounds like a really funny drow! I hope Artemis gets to him soon, and kills the vampires responsible! Please keep up the great work and update soon! |
Deceptifemme chapter 6 . 7/7/2010 I really like hoe Artemis changed and actually asked DRIZZT for help. |
Rebel2020 chapter 6 . 2/26/2010 You stick to the character's personalities so well, one could almost beleive it was Salvatore writing... You know, sooner or later Artemis is going to have to explain the pickle thing to his companions...and won't that be an interesting conversation... Can't wait 'til the next chapter |
mf chapter 6 . 7/11/2009 more |
Zolarix Aster chapter 6 . 12/19/2008 This is an awesome story! I nearly cried when I saw how long it had been since it was updated. Your writng style is good; desciptive, but not overly so, and it flows very smoothly. The plot is awesome. If I hadn't read it, I would be skeptical that it could be pulled off without any OOCness, but you did it. I love the detail about the pickles! Please update! |
blood-fire-dragon chapter 6 . 6/22/2008 GAH! u r so evil to leave it hanging there!T_T i wanna know more! what happens to Aari? why did he stop talking? what's gonna happen to artemis? tell me! plz update this!_~ |
I chapter 1 . 7/31/2007 ok, so you're talented and all of that... and you felt the need to rewrite the whole series... ... ... SO STOP KEEPING US WAITING, DAMN! what's taking so long? write something... ANYTHING! |
Luninarie chapter 6 . 3/26/2007 Hey Fantastic Writer ! I must say you're talented ! Great fiction, but not complete and finished, a pity, really... Please grant us a new chapter soon, or we're gonna die from envy . I love that tender Artemis, but Drizzt seems to me a bit numb. Couldn't he make an effort to understand the ex-killer, and why not, befriend with him... ? Ok ok, not friends, but... real companions, no ? At least, men who respect each other ! (Maybe more on that... Yes, I'm a fan of the Entreri/Drizzt pairing, I admit...) Well, really good fiction ! Hang on ! Nuitari Aquarius (A vrai dire, lire une fiction aussi sympathique ne nous est pas donné tous les jours... J'ose espérer qu'elle ne s'arrêtera pas là, n'est-ce pas ?) |
Alana chapter 6 . 3/21/2007 This is so cool. I like Aari, he would be good for the Assasin. Man, Drizzt is awesome! But, when they get the child back is Drizzt going to teach him the basics of Drow Magic like the Faerie fire that you can use to outline or levitation, maybe even the globe of darkness or doees he already know it and How? That would be cool, he would have two teachers, two to teach him weaponary, and fighting. The other for magic. But again I really like this it is awesome! |
Nicla chapter 6 . 3/21/2007 Please, update soon! This story's amazing! poor drow child.. Art will rescue you! (I hope) |
Yoru no Kuronue chapter 6 . 3/5/2007 I'm enjoying this very much. Update soon!...Please? *huge smile* |