Reviews for Icha Icha Paradise: The True Story |
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![]() ![]() This was good. But I really hoped to find kakashi and some girl as the main love birds and story revolving around them only or so. |
![]() ![]() wut... |
![]() ![]() Wtf this shits good |
![]() ![]() I think these are really great. But just one suggestion: instead of saying 'ow' you should say 'oh' so that it doesn't sound like the character's in pain, and saying 'owee'. You should make some more of these. They're really good. |
![]() ![]() Nice study bro try to make more lemobs |
![]() ![]() Pimpsmacked with nine tails. DAMN |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! OR I WILL AIM MY NUCLEAR GRADE POTATO LAUNCHER AT THE NETHERLANDS! .ps there are nuclear grade potatoes in the launcher .pss the will be yellow cake too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BOOM and inspiration strikes like a ton of brick breaking orbit and creating a creator of creativity in my imagination, ARIGATO! |
![]() ![]() UPDATE OR I WILL COME AT YOU WITH ELMO AND HIS TALKING BANANA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent story and really funny keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Why couldn't this be rated M! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, how random. I love it! Yeah I know IO should work on reading FWwL instead of checking out another story, but this one caught my attention. Anyway um, I'm rambling now,, sorry. Anyway did I mention I love this? |
![]() ![]() NO! WHY MUST IT STOP AT #32? AND WHY CAN'T YOU UPDATE! IT'S BEEN 3 FREAKIN' YEARS DAMMIT! anyways this is an uber awesome series, update sometime in the future or I shall attack you with sharpie markers! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story,... it's just a shame that you stopped writing it,... at least your previous length of time since updating proves that way. I wish to read more of this, or if you don't plan on updating it anymore, can you put it up for adoption or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well love this story could you make it NaruIno along with the NaruHina and NaruAyame IT just works is what I'm thinking. |