How sad! I'm surprised and delighted at how many fics based on the ballet there are. Thanks for writing!

Awww! So sweet, it made me want to watch the ballet. And Svetlana Zakharova!

I loved it! I'm glad it wasn't cliche and she was "awakened by true love's kiss".

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-Mucho love

Kaila Nicole

It almost made me cry! It's very well written. nice job!

Sweetness! I was hoping for a ballet fic... I might write a version of Giselle... using the original names.

Interesting. I liked it. I've seen the Disney verison of this story but I never really cared for it.

I noticed this was a little different from the movie by Odile being Rothbart's daughter. So the movie was wrong.

I liked this better anyway. :) It gives you a more in-depth idea of how the prince is feeling. And in the end, you're kind of left hanging, wondering what he's going to do next. So I liked this. It was good!

tut tut, such an angsty story. but really good anyways. the build up of atmosphere was there, so it was good.

Beautifully written. Sad, but wonderful.

Oh, that is sad! I really feel for him, poor Prince...um, have you read "The Black Swan" by Mercedes Lackey? Odile isn't evil in that on. Well, i liked ur one shot, very sad.

you cant just end it there... there has to be a little more to it. i mean i kno hte ballet and kno that both of them will die together and free the rest of the swans but still... again, i loved it and wish i could say more than gush about how much i loved it but i dont kno what else to say.