Oh, what a sad ending.

this is the most self centered story about lucilla i find your story boring , immature , repetitive , annoying and monotone. here is a tip ms scarlett find another profession , like a bin man becuase this is obvoiusly what you look like because this is obviously a mary-sue

my nubers 07876625125 phone me and ill give you a few pointers

Can't seem to sign on for a signed review, but I wanted to say that I very much enjoyed reading this story. Your prose, characterization, and details are wonderful, as well as how you tie characters from the movie into Julia's life.

As for this "god of small things" that posted about Mary-Sues, yes, they are a staple in fic. However, I don't really see a lot of classic MS qualities in Julia, and quite frankly, even if she is one - and I'm sure you'll have conflicting opinions on that - it doesn't matter, because she's a fascinating character.

I've enjoyed other stories by Miss Scarlett but this is one of the best. A wonderful tale!

I have read this and the previous chapters just a few weeks ago but haven't had a chance to respond until now. I was letting the turn of events in the plot sink in. I found the plot to be very poignant, touching. I have come to care about the heroine Julia and would have liked to know a bit more about her-especially her fate beyond the ending of this novel. I say overall, this has been WELL DONE! I absolutely loved it! KEEP WRITING! You have much to say and share with the world. It was great reading about a feminine experience within this time period.

the story was marvellous. keep it up!:)

the story was marvellous. keep it up!:)

the story was marvellous. keep it up!:)

Add a epilogue. You've left too many loose ends.

What happened to Julia's foster parents? You need

a better explanation for the outcome for Quintus.

Julia would have had to see this letter as to who

is her real father. It is just too loose for your

fans who have been following this too long to have

that quick a cut off. Put on that epilogue and

then go on to another story.

Add a epilogue. You've left too many loose ends.

What happened to Julia's foster parents? You need

a better explanation for the outcome for Quintus.

Julia would have had to see this letter as to who

is her real father. It is just too loose for your

fans who have been following this too long to have

that quick a cut off. Put on that epilogue and

then go on to another story.

This was simply awful! I have no words to express how disappointed I am by such an end.

Well, I finally finished this story...and I have mixed feelings about it. I think the premise is interesting, and some parts of this were well written. But I kind of felt like the most interesting parts were underdeveloped. For example, Julia's decision to marry Marius was completely glossed over, and so I never really understood their relationship. It seemed like half the time she was trapped and unhappy, the other half of the time she loved him and was devastated at his death. Which was it? I think, for me, the various motivations of the characters weren't clear, and so I became confused. Julia was a really interesting character, and I thought the set-up and chapter one was great. But this conclusion is not really satisfying for me. I enjoyed reading it, but I have to admit that I leave this story feeling a little empty and confused.

This story was so interesting I was eagerly awaiting new chapters. Now it has been going over

too long a period of time to maintain interest.

You need to involve more of the original characters from the movie. Or, start a new story

with the chief character being Max. Mary Jane is getting tedious. You've worn us out with simply

dragging this on too long.

Well, pardon me, God of Small Things. From most of the fanfics I've read and enjoyed in the past, I'd got the impression that Mary Sues were hardly uncommon or bad things. If I were you I'd get a life and stop taking it all so seriously.

Miss Scarlett

Dear Miss Scarlett,

No matter how much you try to dress your stories up in florid prose, there are two words that best apply to this tale: Mary. Sue.

You have done a wonderful job with this chapter. I like the introduction of Lucius. i am hopeing that it will lead eventually to the understanding of their true relationship to each other. Keep up the good work.