Reviews for The War
mhmeints chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
loved the story!
Guest chapter 8 . 8/20/2017
It was awesome!
Xochitl chapter 29 . 7/3/2017
One of the best fanfic I have ever read! You have talent! I loved it!
TropicalRemix chapter 29 . 6/30/2017
i'm sad to see this story ended but I really liked it. Can't wait to read more of your stories
TropicalRemix chapter 30 . 3/10/2017
did you fix the same chapter in this story?
TropicalRemix chapter 6 . 3/9/2017
chapter 6 is the same as this one
jessielee14 chapter 31 . 12/11/2016
Great story
chimichurri chapter 31 . 10/26/2016
great story. well built-up. I like the relationships you've built with each character. Awesome job!
Guest chapter 31 . 11/11/2014
Omg so emotional! ! Wonderful job, one of the best :)
lil joker 1989 chapter 31 . 12/30/2013
This was a really great story...I'm really happy I read it... great job : )
lil joker 1989 chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
Your chapter 6 and chapter 7 are the same...
Guest chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
I tried rereading this fic...but I can't! I loved this fic before you rewrote it and now for me at least the quality isn't how it used to be. there are so many word choices and sentence errors that I was only able to read up to the 2nd chappie. The first fic you wrote made sense and if their were any errors I never noticed them because that's how much I enjoyed your fic! A dark and sexy vamp darien my fave! His enemy/ mate vampy serena even better! especially since they end up together but now my joy for this used to be awesome fix is gone. Your first story was started out mysterious and now that mystery is gone! So unfortunately I won't be reading this fic again :'-( but hey don't feel negative about my review this is just my own personal opinion!
nickybluejess chapter 31 . 8/23/2013
Loved it.
Moonxxprincessxx chapter 31 . 1/16/2013
This story moved me in multiple ways. I felt like I was watching the whole event right in front of my eyes. Being able to entrap a reader so deep into a story is pure talent and a work of art. I love every story I read but I have my major favorites, ones I will never forget, and yours is one of them. This blew my mind! Reading this story has sparked a little more inspiration inside of me to write my next chapter for my story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
your story is the best
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