I love this pairing I wish people did more like this. Anyway I love your story!

o/o

I LOVE IT

You did such a wonderful job, and it's a pairing I absolutely ADORE!

GAH!

This stricks me with a creative passion to draw! ... if I ever get out of class... aha.

Note to self: No more reading yaoi in Study Hall... it makes people look at you when you sqeal at well written parts.

I really like your style of writting. It is very interesting. I like how the characters change personality somewhat durring the day and at night. Very nicely written.

Wow, this was so beautifully written, I could really feel Vegats desperation and need for Piccolo. Awesome!

this is awesome, i like how you got portrayed a darker side of their relationship. i really like your writing style in this story, rather artistic, hehe.

*jaw drops*

That was fantastic! Wow!

Not only was that beyond well written it was ...visual. The words of this unfolded in my head in such a way as I could 'see' the story. Very big kudos with the detail. Not to mention the concept! I love it. I encourage you to keep up with your writing. *cheers*

wow, this is great. very beautifully written. so hot. well, it's on my favorites list.

Well...

This is really great! Thanks to this and "The Seven Year Itch" the Piccolo/Vegeta pairing has become my favorite. You write the two of them very well.

One word. Hot. It rocked. Write another.

That was great! I loved it! the way you showed how they differed from their usual personalities was good _

Intresting, I liked the style this was written in.

It's hard to find very many GOOD Piccolo stories.

Thanks _

Wow... That was sick... Not in a bad way, kinda naughty, kinda breathless... Both obbsessed with each other, one strengthened by obsession, one weaken... Lovely author's note, Worked well. I'll be waiting for nex one... Always am.

Your Friend, PC

WOW! THAT WAS AWSOME! i luv piccolo fanfictions! especialy with vegetA! there soo cute together! i thought that you would never update a new one of them! i was getting worried! so please update another chapter in the realy near future!

OH! also thank you for updating "the seven year icth" fic! i was getting desprate and was about to go crazy!so thank you and i hope you still go with more fics!

YOU ROCK!