Reviews for Diplomatic Immunity |
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AgentKalGibbs chapter 11 . 6/8/2018 Oh good, nothing to worry about. Quite wonderful chapters, actually! :) |
AgentKalGibbs chapter 9 . 6/8/2018 That was lovely! (Should I be worried that there’s still two chapters left...?) |
ConnieN chapter 11 . 12/8/2017 Very nicely done. |
ConnieN chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 For your first story, the start is excellent. Am intrigued to read more and looking forward to the ones you write after this. |
mmkbrook chapter 11 . 5/6/2015 Knowing how Jack loves clichés: "All's well that ends well". |
Schatze8210 chapter 11 . 7/1/2014 What a great story! I can't believe that I haven't read it before now! |
nellstar65 chapter 11 . 2/14/2011 Lovely story! Clever storyline! |
O'NeillRoxMyWorld chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 I just had to paued and take the time to say... Excellent opening chapter! Loved it! Totally jealous I didn't write it myself :P |
skiergal chapter 10 . 10/18/2006 I just want to say, that this story disturbed me. But, before you close this window, that is kind of a good thing. Because, stories and narratives that disturbe catch your attention. And, I think that you made a valid point in the nasty and unforgiving ways that a corrupt government will act. I read this story a week ago, and finally figured out what I wanted to say about it, because I couldn't get my feelings straight...wow, long review... |
dyslecksec chapter 11 . 9/14/2006 What a great illustration of the adage, "When life gives you lemons, make lemonade!" Thank you for the enjoyable read. I found the scene where Sam tells Jack she'd rather die than marry him especially poignant. Such a great example of what sort of grief false assumptions can cause. The greatest mistake both Sam & Jack made relating to the whole "Pete thing" was assuming they knew what the other was thinking and feeling. I think you did a superb job in showing that. ) |
Lanta chapter 11 . 10/29/2005 I've enjoyed this story. I do think you could have done more - I'd have liked to see Jacob appear for instance, and to see the two of them settle into their life offworld - but what you did do was quite original and a good read :) |
shiny silver grl chapter 11 . 6/28/2005 Aww, yay! Great ending. And I'd like to read more from you in the future! -sil |
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 11 . 6/28/2005 Excellent ending to a well written story. |
oliviastabler chapter 11 . 6/27/2005 This story was incredible! I love it! I think you should write a sequel. Sam, Jack, and Grace's adventures at the Alpha Site. :) Maybe show how Jacob reacts to them being exiled. I don't know... I'm just looking for an excuse for you to write more. You did a wonderful job with this... I don't want it to end. :) |
Rach5 chapter 11 . 6/27/2005 Great story - Congrats! Cannot wait to read more from you. Well done - great story! great original idea. |