That was so good! I don't think the fic is finished, but if it is(which I hope it's not!), that was an ok ending. Wanted to read what they looked like. What little Toga looked like. Read how Naraku walk in on the wrong family reunion. I bet that will be hilarious. Never seen that many powerful demons in one place. His dumbass will probably think he at a buffet and try to absorb them all. Idiot. Thanks for the read. I hope you consider upgrading.

Will there be more?

i can’t see what website to read the rest! can i have t pretty please? i’m hooked

i really enjoyed this story. until the end, that is. i do not think you realy ended anything. there is so much going on... the unknown siblings... narakus imminent arrival... pups... potential battles... etc etc... i hope one day you decide to continue this or write a sequal where you leave off... so much more can be said on this story. please consider continuing it.

Oh man...! First I was so excited about the promising start of your story, Sesshomaru trying to fix his mistake with an obstinate and furious Inuyasha. Than the end of chapter 4 disappointed me, because it just turned into another inucess story. Personally I think it's the easiest way for a writer to fix their differences.
And what about the discoveries/wondering NatsuMaru made about Inuyasha's fighting abilities when they first met? And I agree with an earlier reviewer that the last chapter is not really a closure, but seems rushed.
Still, I finished the story with interest, because yo very good writer.

Hey loved this story hope you can find the time to update it i hope things are worked out in the story and have a happy ending

While I enjoyed this story, it is by no means complete. It feels as if you gave up on it and wrote a hasty last chapter to wash your hands of it. I'd love to see a sequel.

Its awesome.

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

waaaaa where's the rest? Is their a link? if so can you please please please give it to me! This story is soo addictive, you are a brilliant writer, seriously i love this story!

i really like this story, but it ends so abruptly. is there a sequel?

LOVE this story! Has me completely hooked and captivated! Just adore reading your stories, Moon! You are beyond talented and just can't wait to read more! Ja ne and good luck! xoxo ]]

Plz update soon

really sweet and nice!

aw, this chapter was so sweet! i can't wait to read more!