Hey send an update when someone continues your story I would love to know what happens next.

wow that sucks read the first 6 chapters and i have to say it was a good read up to chapter 5 then it Got a bit confusing because i thing you where rushing it a bit but now your abandoning not only this story but all of your stories really sad to see this happen well i hope you will come back to wright new stories in the future or even better pick this one back up and complete it any ways i want to thank you for sharing as well as for all the time and effort put into this story

Interesting story good luck!

Still reading this, but your story's title brings up a pet peeve of mine. Unless you intended your story to come across as "make-up knight" there's a couple definitions you might want to be aware of.

rouge
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Related to rouge: rogue
rouge (ro͞ozh)
n.
1. A red or pink cosmetic for coloring the cheeks or lips.
2. A reddish powder, chiefly ferric oxide, used to polish metals or glass.
v. rouged, roug·ing, roug·es
.
1. To put rouge onto: rouged her cheeks.
2. To color or prettify as if with a facial cosmetic: "Their job is to rouge up the war ... to turn the horror into cheering press releases" (Richard Corliss).
.
To use rouge.

Compare and contrast the word you used in the title with...

rogue
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rogue (rōg)
n.
1. An unprincipled, deceitful, and unreliable person; a scoundrel or rascal.
2. One who is playfully mischievous; a scamp.
3. A wandering beggar; a vagrant.
4. A vicious and solitary animal, especially an elephant that has separated itself from its herd.
5. An organism, especially a plant, that shows an undesirable variation from a standard.
adj.
1. Vicious and solitary. Used of an animal, especially an elephant.
2. Large, destructive, and anomalous or unpredictable: rogue tornado.
3. Operating outside normal or desirable controls: "How could a single rogue trader bring down an otherwise profitable and well-regarded institution?" (Saul Hansell).
v. rogued, rogu·ing, rogues
.
To remove (diseased or abnormal specimens) from a group of plants of the same variety.
.
To remove diseased or abnormal plants.

The transposing of two letters can drastically change the meaning of the word.

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Well, love the concept but I do feel like you threw in too much stuff too fast. Especially all those blessings/curses.

Would LOVE to see a new chapter, if not a rewrite.

Hope you take up writing again.

Ok, you have asked me for a review... this is what I got

First off... I have no fucking clue what's going on. Slow down and explain what the hell is going on for all the people reading this in a rewrite (or, you could just send me an explination to

sannixx

at

yahoo

and I could do it for you in my free time.)

Secondly, is there incest in this story? That's a little creepy.

And why is Ranma ok with having sex as a girl? I'm just not following this at all.

What was the style that Nodoka and Kimiko used, and how does it relate to the style Ranma made up?

Who was the guy who asked Ranma to make up the saber style?

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON? For like the third time.

If the email above didn't transfer, just go to the email button on my Bio and get it from there... well, let me know. I do like this, but it's confusing. One of the most confusing ones I've ever read, to be precise.

The other was a Naruto one where almost everyone was the opposite gender (female Naruto and Sasuke, Neji, Lee, Male Hinata, Ino, Sakura, ect) and Minato and naruto's mom (can't remember the name for the life of me) never died, and Naruto is banished because they believe she was running of to join with the female orochimaru... it just wasn't written all that great. i still have no idea what the fuck was going on.

it is a good story to read.

i like this story, its pretty interesting. i really like the mix of blessings on ranma, instead of picking something to give her, give her all of them. hehe, brilliant, and being able to give them to nabs and kas, even better. i hope you write more on this one. till later.

Great story. We will get hopefull a lot more chapters to read.

Tzeentch likes all the transformation magic that is around the human and has gifted the ability to change at will

As in chapter 5 stated does it mean he/she is able to change at will between forms and gender. Does he now have a male and female id?

I think i like the new dna mix.

but your story is a litte confusing so i will read it one chapter one again. does not remember too much about it. was to long ago.

Not bad. So did Kasumi curse herself as well? Keep writing.

Innortal

This is a rather strange but well put together story I just can't stop reading. Kinda like your Tench fic Kotetsu Veriti (sp) Looking forward to more.

Good part here, and looking forward to how Ranma dnt ehgirls get around and what's going to happen when they go on this new trip, as well as what the fathers might try to do when they leave.

Very interesting story. It is a unique one that I have not seen ever. At times it can be confusing as to what has occured and what is happening. The flashbacks and explenations are not pointed out during the story, therefore it makes it hard to follow. Otherwise it is a interestingly good story. Keep it up.

Interesting part here, and it looks like Ranma/Ranko is in for very interesting times, as well as it looks as though their love life is going to be in for more upsets. Too bad that the spirits won't leave him/her alone, though it'll be fun to see where the story takes this direction from here on in.