is the person on the cover Elphaba?

Oooohhhh so he didn't love her he loved out :0

Wow! Nice story! I try to picture Snape with children but I can't imagine him loving anyone other than Lily so... we need a backstory on how Snape got married and divorced! :)

i think that u should make this back in time or make snape only remember to give moony the potion

Draco malfoy deserved that punishment

Nooooooooooooo how could you malfoy you are a wee sh**

In the chapter Severus Snape is full of surprises.
I was really surprised when you said that he had kids and he had Muggle clothes

Mate I know how you feel I didn't want Sirius black to die either so I understand your choices I think it's good mate

Thanks for another chapter

Definitely an interesting first chapter

he made horcruxes not reliquaries

This entire thing just had an odd rushed feel to it. The pacing and dialogue was weird and filled with exposition

Night, nightmare, midnight, coal

ah, yes. 'expelliarmus' the spell that does everything

Kinky title *wiggles eyebrows* bite me, eh, eh?
'Ohhhhh, Remus, bite me, ohhhh, just like that! Harder, harder!'
'Harry, we *grunt* shouldn't do this! Ohh, you're much ohh too youoooooh young for me!'
'I don't care! Bite me, bite me! Bite me like I'm a piece of meat, ohhhh, yeah, just like that, just do that, ohhhh, Remus, ohhhh!'
'Harry, you're so beautiful when you're like this! Ohhhhhhh, Harry, I-I'm gonna, I'm gonna, ohhhhhhhh...!'
Hehe, I'll leave the rest of my pervert-ness over there, in your imagination, hehehehe.
I should really get some help, ahaha, my therapist already Recommended me to a asylum, but I was waaaaay too far past insane to get in there. What's worse is that I'm completely self aware, hehehe, HaHaHaHaHa, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, loved the chapter!