Nice. i LIKED ending in chapter 10. it was bittersweet.

you person. you have no idea how many times during this story i yelled at everysingle one of the people in if for being complete IDIOTS AND FOR BEING STUPID AND OH MY GOD THE AAAAANGST, and you know what, it was completely worth it, you almost made me cry for pete's sake, you jerk, how the crap did you manage to write such a freakin amazin fic with proper grammar and ALL THE LOVE AND YOU DONT EVEN KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS or how much i DIED when THEY WERE ALL BEING STUPID *SOB* THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FREAKIN AMAZIN STORY THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU ARE AWESOME

ok, and now that i am calmer 8D seriously, one of the best kurofai fics i have eva read. Great job. i liked the 2nd ending best, but i had one major prob ( just my opinion ) so you should stop reading now unless you wanna have the urge to slap me

kuro-chan could have definitly have traded ginryuu for fai's tattoo or something. Sakura had to pay with her memories cause she literally had almost nothing of physical value that could even amount to a price. However, despite Fai having become more precious to him then ginryuu, ginryuu's value doesnt decrease, as it is still a powerful sword with generation's of feelings/blood/memories attached. So, it could almost definatly be traded for fai's tatoo. yeah ill be quiet now.

kool luv it

poor fai. he seems to have been so close to ashura, a far deeper relationship than he has with kurogane. sad that it would end like that.

i really loved this story the sad ending i couldnt even finish readign it but i liek the second one it would make a good sequal to it and also the last endign i liked that one to

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That was really good! But it felt like you cut it off before it ended. Im not saying you shouldve brought him back or anything after all this is the sad one but you shouldve ended it differently in my opinion still good though. I think I like the happy one better though.

Aww, that was so cute. I loved this. THIS... is how a good story should be! A good plot, long story, long chapters, depth and you've caught the characters' personalities very well too. Good job girl! You rock!

i cried so much even with the happy ending! my friends read it with me, and even though i cry at all sappy things they said that i cried more this time than i did when watching 'blood and chocolate' and they thought that i would run out of tears THAT time!

not bad~ :D

YAy! Happy ending!

THIS ENDING IS JUST SO SAD AND WONDERFUL! THERE IS HOPE! But... nevermind, just a thought, but, somehow, even if it will never happen... you made his hope sound so real. And that's kinda heart breaking. Wonderful ending. Better than the last one... (it kinda creeps me, somehow)

nice one

it's quite sweet, but I also like the secomd ending. The third ending does seem weird in my opinion...thank you for a great read!

Too much melodrama X.X

J'adore cette fic Elle est de loin ma favourite

Moi aussi j'ai imaginé la même chose pour le passé de Fay ( mais bon Clamp a déjà commencé le passé de Fay )

J'adore Ashura et Fay , c'est un beau couple la façon dont Ashura prends Fay pour son meilleurs amis jusqu'a aller l'aimer est vraiment bien choisi

Ensuite Fay qui offre un cadeau à son ami , SO CUTE !

Tu ecris tres bien il y a du suspence , du yaoi , ton style d'écriture est tres soigné

J'ai dû relire plus d'un vingtaine de fois

P.S : My english is very bad sorry , so i write this review in French ...sorry é.è