love write more.

Hey i like this story but when are you gonna update. And was the other guitarist Demyx?

Amazing story! Clever and hilarious

when will ppl realize no one likes OCs? And the ppl that DO are probably like, 12...are your 12? you seem liike it. great job writing a piece of shit. I couldn't even read anymore my eyss were bleeding so badly.

*gasp*

DEMYX! :D!

Of course Demz would be in here, I mean, duh... *slaps forehead*

I'm so glad you updated! Can't wait till the next one!

I must tell you that the whole 'cloud-being-the-quitarits' part was completely predictable. Or, that might just be me. I'm very perceptive at times and can guess at any time what something will be. I'm almost always correct.

a whole at least you .how did i know that cloud would be a .the other guitarist was demyx...i think :D

Wow what a great story!

Plz update I beg u plz!

I may be an Aerith x Cloud fan,but I think I'll switch!

Go Reina x Cloud!

Never heard of that band before, when I picked them up on radioblogclub I listened along with the words and I really pictured The Obession band playing. once again, awsome chapter and I hope to see the RxC relationship develop some more _ wheehe!

WowW! great start to what I can only see as really good OC fiction. for someone so young, you sure can write! Jeebus girl XD I liked how Cloud's introduction was kept mysterious although despite the fact we already know who he is lol. well anyway, i'm scooting over to chapter 2 now, I hope it's as great as this chapter was.

update or i poke u _

Funny!



/\_/\

, ..~Nyo

-/ \ …WARNING: Don’t be fooled by the innocent guise.

(_)_, ...This cat’s secretly plotting your demise.

update.

like,

son.

i read all of this at one time,

and i want to read more.

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plzkthnx.

haha. ]

SO-so sad and yet it's like everyday life. your a good writer.

I liked it tons and tons.

:D Update soon please.:D