Reviews for Winter's Eve |
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NuttyThenutjob chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 Justice Force, Death reaper,.. Okay i just prepare smores now.. |
Catalina Waters chapter 1 . 6/6/2014 Interesting story, very creative! Definitely one of my favs. |
Fandombatched chapter 1 . 4/5/2013 aw i just love this one |
Smile or else chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 Jeez... even at the first part you had me sobbing so much! Sobbing as in tears clouding my vision so I couldn't even read :'( Great job! |
LilNinjaWolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2010 Wow, yes this was a bit weird, but I like it. Glad to see the brothers came together to save Leo. And shadow was so sweet taking Leo's place. |
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 Great job on the story but I wish you could of made death put a better fight for Leo, oh well great job. |
dreamer chapter 1 . 6/3/2009 that was a good story. keep writing (and stuff ...) |
Koriat Cyredanthem chapter 1 . 4/17/2008 I do like this story, but PLEASE update your other ones... ESPECIALLY the one where Leo gets amnesia. I can never remember how to spell that one. (Something something): Corruption Equals Destruction. I love that one so much... I like how you write a lot of stories, but could you work on one at a time, finish it - or get close - before starting another? It'd make it easier to keep track of who is doing what when and where. (Is that right?) But you don't have to heed my suggestion; I don't keep track of such things so well. I liked when Shadow gave his life for Leo. Almost made me tear up... I like dogs, and to think Shadow knew he was going to die and decided to go out like a hero... Amazing. *sniffles* Koriat |
eeveemew chapter 1 . 9/10/2007 I liked it! I'm glad it ended happily... I hate it when the turtles hate each other T_T |
Tewi chapter 1 . 12/4/2005 i love et! very good job, glad they're a family once again! |
Cassie chapter 1 . 9/30/2005 Yay! Me likey this story, nicely done. |
Gretchen chapter 1 . 6/14/2005 Wow. I really liked that one. True, that is weird, but it's a lot better than most weird ones. And I do mean A LOT better. For example "The squrels are taking over the world." But, anyway that was great and I look forward to reading your other fics, in other words "Bla bla bla bla bla bla" Gotta go now. Bye. |
Phoenix Red Lion chapter 1 . 6/8/2005 Nicely done! And I really liked how ya protrayed Death...though is there really a folk lore about this? I study folk lore and never encountered it. If so I would love to know where ya got it! If not, no sweat. *grins* I really enjoyed reading this though I wish ya had mentioned something about the guys' reactions or a reflection to finding that piece of blue bandana. You mentioned it several times in the story, so I got the impression that it was rather important aspect to the story. Yet ya never really finished it...left it hanging in the air. Other than that the story was great. Keep up the great work! |
spootycup chapter 1 . 6/8/2005 wow... that was truly great... loved it... keep it up... |
beth hartLeo Oneal chapter 1 . 6/5/2005 Thank u so very much for this "very special" story that u wrote about Leo As i read this story the emotions was so very real to me that it was ACTUALLY LIKE i was there with Leo feeling what he was feeling It was like everything the turtles went through [Leo- Don- Mikey- and Raph] i went through it with them...i could feel the cold that Leo felt, taste the garbage he ate, and feel the lonliness he felt...and i felt the pain and anger that Leo's brothers had and also the love that they once again re-discovered for themselves and Leo Will u seriously write at least one more chap, maybe two, that will show Leo's full recovery and show the love between him and his brothers growing stronger? I have this mental pic of Leo [fully recovered] and his brothers visiting Splinter's grave to talk with him...wouldn't that be a fitting end to "Winter's Eve?" ASAP I WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF U WOULD E-MAIL ME AND TELL ME OF YOUR DECISION **Take good care of yourself and God Bless!** ' *Beth Hart(Leo Oneal)* *LEONARDO*IS*MY*MOST*FAV*#1*TURTLE* * |