Neat! However, there are a few things I'd like to point out:

1)It needs some spell-checking and grammar-checking.

2)It's Manon and not "Mano". Manon was not a type of heaven; instead it was a deity created for the movie.

3)Sarah's mother died while giving birth to her. (I should know, having seen the movie enough times to know this.)

4)Sarah's father, from as much as I can gather about his personality while watching the film, is a nice guy, and would never abuse Sarah in any way.

5)Everything seems to move too quickly. You should expand on what Sarah is feeling, as well as what she's thinking. Without those to help the story, it's just seen as another cliché "teen cuts self" ficlet. (And I've read enough of those myself to know what *that's* supposed to be.)

Other than that, keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and phenomenally creative writing! :)

I like it. Just finished watching the movie and it was brilliant!

I particularly liked how you stuck to what was the flashback scene in the film exactly as it happened.

Just saw the movie for the first time ten minutes ago and was hunting for some good backstory; glad I found some!

~The Sept

1. Needs some rigorous spell- & grammar-checking.

2. Sarah's mother died giving birth to her.

3. Manon (not "Mano") was a deity created for the movie, not a type of heaven.

4. It's pretty clear from the movie that Sarah's dad never abused her, so he's very out-of-character in this fic.

5. Everything seems to move too quickly- you should expand on what Sarah is feeling & what she's thinking. Without that, it just reads as another cliché "teen cuts self" ficlet.

Good work, especially the way you linked the action to the lyrics by GC.

That was good. The lyrics go really good with this! :)

That's so sad... but a very good interpretation of wehat happened.

This was very good. Slightly inaccurate, because in the film Sarah's mother died giving birth, but still very good.

that is really good

very good.

dude this rulz! dont understand what its from or anything, but i like how it's been written, keep up the good work!

y u have to be so damn good huh? lolage, its great! keep it up! laterz matage!