This was soo good! I really love the way it was written and the end was really a surprise, I didn't see the Snape as death thing coming, plus the song tied in really well.

Good Job!

very nice. I cried a little but it was really good!

beautiful... just beautiful... i love the concept.

AWESOME STORY1 SWEET I WANNA BE THE GRIM REAPER!

Hi, I just wanted to say that this is a beautiful piece of writing you have made with this story. I love the style of writing you have, and somehow, I feel like there should be some sort of a sequel for this story. Don't you agree? Please make a sequel for this.

That was so beautiful, I think I understand. Albus made a contract with him, let Harry live to protect them, right? Okay, but Harry died to let the Order live?

wow, that was so absolutly beautiful! i've never read anything like it... your way with words is so speciell and makes everything feel so original! the way you write double of what a person thinks sometimes... um... let me give you a quote so you understand what i meant :)

"Harry opened his eyes and stared at them. Forgive me. He didn't owe them anything anymore. I've done what I can. He had fulfilled his destiny. Let me go. He just wanted to be free. Release me. And free to choose his life and his love. Please."

although there should be different kinds of text so you better see the difference... but i loved the way you wrote that! so beautiful it made my heart ace!

the idea of making snape in to death was a very good idea and it even took me quite some time to figure it out. it might be because i'm a little slow, but i realised the meaning of "living on borrowed time" just in the end, and other stories that are supposed to have a surprise ending often tend to reveal it all too soon...

so it was a great story, i erally loved it! it's going straight to my favs! cheers!

wow, that was so absolutly beautiful! i've never read anything like it... your way with words is so speciell and makes everything feel so original! the way you write double of what a person thinks sometimes... um... let me give you a quote so you understand what i meant :)

"Harry opened his eyes and stared at them. Forgive me. He didn't owe them anything anymore. I've done what I can. He had fulfilled his destiny. Let me go. He just wanted to be free. Release me. And free to choose his life and his love. Please."

although there should be different kinds of text so you better see the difference... but i loved the way you wrote that! so beautiful it made my heart ace!

the idea of making snape in to death was a very good idea and it even took me quite some time to figure it out. it might be because i'm a little slow, but i realised the meaning of "living on borrowed time" just in the end, and other stories that are supposed to have a surprise ending often tend to reveal it all too soon...

so it was a great story, i erally loved it! it's going straight to my favs! cheers!

Wow...*_* An amazing story! I loved reading this! The concept was beautiful and wonderfully deep (esp. considerfing that it was a fanfic) Wonderful wonderful! The ending came as a very pleasant (albeit in a morbidly/ironically grim sort of way) surprise. As well, a nicely chosen song to finish it off with; very fitting A story that I will definately be adding to my "fav stories" list!

that was bloody brillant. O, my f**K'n god I have shiver just thinking about it that was one of the best story I have ever had the pleaser of reading and i that you for it writing. I would never of thought the romance horror could be so so well hot that was beyond all words to discribe I love it! I love it more them the very air in which I am forced to breath! you really and I mean really have some magic fingers their. the pure imagery was ecasy to may ears or in this case eyes/ hehe

please keep up the good work and maybe write another of this romance horrors i would love to read more

Cam

one thing, wow! this story is great! :D:D:D its a great oneshot(?) and I hope more of these comes(not the same kind mind you:) your a great author and I love your stories:)

me

Jun

what an interesting idea. too bad this story ended as such that you cant really expand on it. i think it would be interesting to find how the contract was made and death stuck amongst the living so long with his goal (harry) so close for so many years

That was very good. I hadn't ever thought of that before. All of your fics are very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

I know I'm sick in the head but I actually liked it. I can just see Dumbledore making a contract with Death and then trying to pretend it doesn't matter.