Your character motivations makes way more sense than in the movies, Anakin's fall especially. As to why he would be attracted to Palps, why not? Why is missing a father figure and is cannonically attracted to older characters

I might post a more detailed review some day. Just wanna say, i love this piece like crazy! It struck all the right places...and now I'm a mess. This is some fabulous material here and I wish i could have more! Kudos to the writer!

Hi , who write the fanfiction the lover?, say the name please

Now palms gettin crazy

Well, it's difficult to think of romance with somebody as sadistic as lightning-throwing Sith Lord. Granted, Voldemort also throws Crucio around like candy... But with Voldemort, it can at least be excused by insanity from splitting his soul; besides, he has a beloved pet, snake Nagini. Palpatine has neither split soul nor a pet to cuddle with.
Where do you think I learnt to lie like that, hmm? Fun.
Tenil Ban was just a random Naboo citizen encouraged by the Sidious (I guess) to attack the suspect. Force influences people easily when they already want to do the same thing...
His fate will be the same as ours Will Anakin bring Kenobi to darkness?
Ouch, just how will Palpatine's recording device hide that Palpatine used lightning and red saber against Jedi? That Palpatine was the first one to strike? How will Palpatine edit the footage?
Flaming passion didn't go away, it's burning bitterly underneath the ashes. He is angry with himself.
I was pleasantly surprised by the clones. Palpatine plans, plans for nearly everything.
Palpatine's weakness is overconfidence, and Vader knows that, and Jedi probably know that.
Jade... Jade! /howl/ How could her devotion run so deep? I thank her, I thank her, for ending happy beyond possible, and yet, and yet, I grieve that she had to do this.
It seems that Palpatine knew that his own weakness is overconfidence, and installed extra failsafes into his plans to accommodate this.
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.

I like neatness, I wouldn't be able to stand sauce dripping in direction of my clothes. And yet, I don't dislike exertion, I would have liked to learn combat to an extent. I am more like Count Dooku, I guess.

OMG! I LOVED this story so MUCH! There aren't enough stories like this.

That was amazing! Read it in one night, it was worth it.

la meilleure fic star wars au monde !
merci de tout mon coeur !

Adorably!

I have no words to describe this feeling... You should publish this. Truly. I've never loved a story this much...

You stirred my very soul. MY VERY SOUL. I don't recall being this touched in a long time... It's as if I can feel what they're feeling, especially Palpatine.

My GOD! I have no words. I love this so much.

I respect Palpatine. I really do. I mean it. He's impressive, so impressive... *licks lip*

I love how you managed it! Really, a Palpatine romance without making him OOC, I'd say this is perfection. That's exactly how I expect him to react and think. Utterly splendid!