I love you story.

That was sooo good. I loved reading it, amazing story - good job 3

great!

Aww this was such a good story and the ending was sad and just heart breaking but you did a great job. Congrats for making such a good story :)

You probably know this by now, but James was a Chaser, and team captain. Not a Seeker. Not because I said so, but JK Rowling said so, and as far as the HP universe goes, she is God. Lol. I'm likin' this so far. Its pretty good. I, personally, prefer more.. ahh.. sophicsticated writing styles, but.. meh. Lol. You're pretty good as far as grammar and spelling goes. Really excited to see how this goes on. Oh, and I know alot of authors(Me included) like to listen to music while they write. Check out a few of Galt Aureus' songs. Coming Down, The Queen Of Blades, Citadels, and a few other of your choosing. Galt is a.. unique band. Sometiems their songs are depressing, and slow, and some are fast and a REALLY weird cross of Classical, and Rock. Trust me, not as bad as it sounds.

Later,

AkeOokami- BrightWolf- 673

P.S. The second thing is my pen-name, and the third is an old habit frrom a game. Later...

hhhmmmmm. to fast paced I think

yay! i like this story already! especially after the one i just read -_- this kind of l/j fic is my favorite! can't wait to continue! :D

wow... this was an amazing story :) keep up the good work x

Um... so you basically summed up the entire story so far in this chapter. Not sure how I feel about it. It was unneeded.

I feel that she is COMPLETELY overeacting. it was an hones\st mistake!

huh. I never really thought of Remus being so... active. But i like him this way. *Grins wickedly*

This is a good story line but you make lily look so weak. every fight she has been is she is always loosing

see i knew if he told her it would end badly lily and james will most likely break up

perfect , the only bad thing is the lame oc

very bad oc you got there :( i hope it doesn't appear too much in the story