Reviews for The Haunting Place
Anni chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Sigh. Just checking back. Citadel, where are you? I still think of this excellent fic from time to time, and hope ...
Smithy chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
I found this Adult Fan Fiction, and lemme tell ya, it was smokin' hot {especially Chapters Seventeen and Eighteen}. I feel badly that you went through all of that displacement due to Hurricane Katrina. The cast of the second {and third} Pirates movies were constantly interrupted by that active Hurricane Season {2005} and had to halt production constantly. This year's Hurricane Season is somehat active, even though they didn't reach a hurricane until the 'I' named storm {Irene} and she did a whole lot of damage in the Northeast, and it wouldn't surprise me if that name is retired, just like Katrina was.
Smithy chapter 15 . 8/5/2011
The pure imagary of a naked Will with the sheet wrapped around his waist was just plain good. My gripe is that somehow I cannot get this story from adultfanfiction.
Sarah chapter 18 . 2/19/2011
I hate that you had to censor this! All the best parts are gone! I tried finding it on adult fanfic but I couldn't. Do you have a link? I love this story so much! If you can't respond to this my login name is jubil :)
NightmareAhead chapter 7 . 6/26/2009
"“Do’n panic!” he displayed his palms to the Maren, splaying the fingers, as if she was hysterical when really it was his voice that was rising in anxiety."

ROFL!
NightmareAhead chapter 5 . 6/26/2009
"Crack!

The two bottom legs of the flimsy cot broke, sprawling her to the cold floor. She lied there awhile in a heap, beaten. “I hate me life,” Maren declared vehemently before lurching unsteadily up, dusting off her dress."

That made me lol.
Alvilda chapter 29 . 8/12/2008
I'm still hoping for miracle, and for this baby to continue!
Anni chapter 29 . 10/17/2007
After two years, I think we have to consider this great work abandoned. RIP, 'Haunting Place.' Your potential was vast.
Erisi Ziaen chapter 29 . 5/3/2007
Jesus, Mary, and Joseph! Bloody hell that was amazing!

*drools over the best POTC fic she has read in a long time*

*mutters over Jack Sparrow, *Captain* Jack Sparrow: bloody bastard.*

Citadel, that was bloody amazin'! I loved Kristi, makes me want to have a bleedin prostitue ghost to keep me company on lonely days.

I just finised "Cacho!" last night, unfortunately it almost got me into trouble. You see, my parents want me in bed by 10 PM, I stayed up til 12. *blushes* It's very good, it's been keeping me company at night when sleep doesn't wish to come.

I do hope that you are not finished quite yet with the story...'tis very well written! Jack, is Jack to a tee, I must admit, which is very hard for some writers to explain him in almost perfect detail.

Sorry, I be ramblin' now.

Cheers to a job well done, Citadel!
Erisi Ziaen chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Wow. You have such talent. I really enjoyed the first chapter. You are very good with description. I'm looking foward to the next chapter!
JollyVenturer chapter 8 . 7/25/2006
wow wowzee wowzers this is an AWESOME story! i'm suprised not more people have read and praised you for such great work! this story had all i was looking for, humor, romance and everythin else i cant explain it...but basically it made me jump up and down in crazy excitment when i read it, and not many fics do that. keep writing! hope all is goin well!
AKA Hummer chapter 29 . 7/17/2006
Gosh darnit. I've reached my limit of 150 fav stories.. TT_TT DAMN. Sigh. Well... it's okay... I can always add you to my author/story alert and add this as a fav story on my other account. Whoo hoo. Great great story. Jack- I mean.. Captain Jack Sparrow's character is portrayed extremely well... Love his flirtiness, intoxication, silliness, and sexiness. Rawr. Maren is satsifyingly un-annoying, and I absolutely adore Kristy's cursing, man-on-man fetish, and all-round naughtiness. Great characters, great plot, and great story... Please update soon!
Leanan Sidhe chapter 29 . 6/21/2006
Hey there Citadel! I have to say I do love this chapter...very um...how to put this delicately...raunchy! Just the way I like 'em! I was so happy to see your work was back and I'm so sorry to hear about your trouble. You see Miss Citadel, if I may call you that? You are perhaps one of the only two inspirations I have on this site...your work is simply brilliant and I am happy everyday to know that authors such as yourself exist in this world. Therefore I was wondering if I may mention this fanfic in a fanfiction of my own, just on passing reference of course, during the story? If not, please send me word that you would rather I didn't.

I am eagerly anticipating the coming chapters.

As ever,

Miss Sid

P.S. By the way, for informational purposes, is Cacho a real card game or was it in the past?
Sauruna chapter 29 . 5/24/2006
We want more! We want more!
TheRiz chapter 29 . 3/30/2006
I hope you'll complete this fanfiction because it's really good.
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