Reviews for The Haunting Place |
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Anni chapter 1 . 11/26/2012 Sigh. Just checking back. Citadel, where are you? I still think of this excellent fic from time to time, and hope ... |
Smithy chapter 1 . 9/15/2011 I found this Adult Fan Fiction, and lemme tell ya, it was smokin' hot {especially Chapters Seventeen and Eighteen}. I feel badly that you went through all of that displacement due to Hurricane Katrina. The cast of the second {and third} Pirates movies were constantly interrupted by that active Hurricane Season {2005} and had to halt production constantly. This year's Hurricane Season is somehat active, even though they didn't reach a hurricane until the 'I' named storm {Irene} and she did a whole lot of damage in the Northeast, and it wouldn't surprise me if that name is retired, just like Katrina was. |
Smithy chapter 15 . 8/5/2011 The pure imagary of a naked Will with the sheet wrapped around his waist was just plain good. My gripe is that somehow I cannot get this story from adultfanfiction. |
Sarah chapter 18 . 2/19/2011 I hate that you had to censor this! All the best parts are gone! I tried finding it on adult fanfic but I couldn't. Do you have a link? I love this story so much! If you can't respond to this my login name is jubil :) |
NightmareAhead chapter 7 . 6/26/2009 "“Do’n panic!” he displayed his palms to the Maren, splaying the fingers, as if she was hysterical when really it was his voice that was rising in anxiety." ROFL! |
NightmareAhead chapter 5 . 6/26/2009 "Crack! The two bottom legs of the flimsy cot broke, sprawling her to the cold floor. She lied there awhile in a heap, beaten. “I hate me life,” Maren declared vehemently before lurching unsteadily up, dusting off her dress." That made me lol. |
Alvilda chapter 29 . 8/12/2008 I'm still hoping for miracle, and for this baby to continue! |
Anni chapter 29 . 10/17/2007 After two years, I think we have to consider this great work abandoned. RIP, 'Haunting Place.' Your potential was vast. |
Erisi Ziaen chapter 29 . 5/3/2007 Jesus, Mary, and Joseph! Bloody hell that was amazing! *drools over the best POTC fic she has read in a long time* *mutters over Jack Sparrow, *Captain* Jack Sparrow: bloody bastard.* Citadel, that was bloody amazin'! I loved Kristi, makes me want to have a bleedin prostitue ghost to keep me company on lonely days. I just finised "Cacho!" last night, unfortunately it almost got me into trouble. You see, my parents want me in bed by 10 PM, I stayed up til 12. *blushes* It's very good, it's been keeping me company at night when sleep doesn't wish to come. I do hope that you are not finished quite yet with the story...'tis very well written! Jack, is Jack to a tee, I must admit, which is very hard for some writers to explain him in almost perfect detail. Sorry, I be ramblin' now. Cheers to a job well done, Citadel! |
Erisi Ziaen chapter 1 . 11/25/2006 Wow. You have such talent. I really enjoyed the first chapter. You are very good with description. I'm looking foward to the next chapter! |
JollyVenturer chapter 8 . 7/25/2006 wow wowzee wowzers this is an AWESOME story! i'm suprised not more people have read and praised you for such great work! this story had all i was looking for, humor, romance and everythin else i cant explain it...but basically it made me jump up and down in crazy excitment when i read it, and not many fics do that. keep writing! hope all is goin well! |
AKA Hummer chapter 29 . 7/17/2006 Gosh darnit. I've reached my limit of 150 fav stories.. TT_TT DAMN. Sigh. Well... it's okay... I can always add you to my author/story alert and add this as a fav story on my other account. Whoo hoo. Great great story. Jack- I mean.. Captain Jack Sparrow's character is portrayed extremely well... Love his flirtiness, intoxication, silliness, and sexiness. Rawr. Maren is satsifyingly un-annoying, and I absolutely adore Kristy's cursing, man-on-man fetish, and all-round naughtiness. Great characters, great plot, and great story... Please update soon! |
Leanan Sidhe chapter 29 . 6/21/2006 Hey there Citadel! I have to say I do love this chapter...very um...how to put this delicately...raunchy! Just the way I like 'em! I was so happy to see your work was back and I'm so sorry to hear about your trouble. You see Miss Citadel, if I may call you that? You are perhaps one of the only two inspirations I have on this site...your work is simply brilliant and I am happy everyday to know that authors such as yourself exist in this world. Therefore I was wondering if I may mention this fanfic in a fanfiction of my own, just on passing reference of course, during the story? If not, please send me word that you would rather I didn't. I am eagerly anticipating the coming chapters. As ever, Miss Sid P.S. By the way, for informational purposes, is Cacho a real card game or was it in the past? |
Sauruna chapter 29 . 5/24/2006 We want more! We want more! |
TheRiz chapter 29 . 3/30/2006 I hope you'll complete this fanfiction because it's really good. |