Reviews for A Monumental Experience: Sasuke's First Sunburn |
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Zany is Me chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 haha, loved the story (and you note ;P) i almost just favored and left...but your note convinced me otherwise. great writing style- there are so many people that can't write with an easy rhythm, a good sentence structure and amusing dialogue. whether or not you continue this with a sequel, i look forward to reading future writing by you :) -EC |
liekanime chapter 1 . 4/24/2013 Nice it was so cute! You done a very good Job in writing this! |
jessi chapter 1 . 2/1/2013 Great story, I really liked it! |
Banana Matriarch chapter 1 . 4/24/2011 LMAO, the curve of her foot, toe lol do write more |
baka chapter 1 . 12/19/2010 That. was. hilarious. Seriously. |
UnfadedBeauty96 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010 awesome story |
lovelyell chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 I have to say that sunburn is one of the last things i would think of that would hurt a ninja but you definatly pulled it off. Great story keep writing |
shamitt chapter 1 . 11/25/2009 *giggles in excitement* I love the SasuSaku in this so much! I loved how you made Sasuke be like '*sigh* no no its Sakura' to him being like '*smirk* sakura is smexay ;)' keep up the good work! you should write more cute/short/silly oneshots! :D |
SasuSaku15394 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009 haha lolz sunburnt sasuke,id like to see that |
gleekygeek chapter 1 . 8/19/2009 write more please..ima SasuxSaku fan :D |
ShreddingRibbons chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 very cute, and it doesn't surprise me Sasuke got a sunburn, he's a klutx like that. Poor, sheltered Naruto, he doesn't have a clue. I bet kakashi's lovin' it though. |
theroyalspice chapter 1 . 6/22/2009 Hehe.. :) NICE! |
deep-and-random chapter 1 . 6/2/2009 really good story- loved reading it XD |
TrinityAngelX chapter 1 . 1/29/2009 LOL, omg xD that was too cute :3 |
sakurababy101 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008 well i like it! do another one! |