Awww... I never really liked Mickey a whole lot; I thought he was crazy waiting around for Rose when it was clear that the Doctor came first for her, and he could be pretty annoying. Regardless of all that, I think you've captured his personality and his voice perfectly. I could totally imagine him saying everything here. Very sweet and rather sad.

Good story.

aw..

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Poor Mickey the idiot!

You wrote him really well, I thought the line

"But it occurred to him that for all the Doctor had said, he probably knew Rose a thousand times better than Mickey ever had." was a nice thing to end on. Must be hard for Mickey though, to have some bloke come along, who, in the space of -days- knows your girlfriend better then you have after years...

Can't wait till 7:00! Boom Town, and another appearance form the Roses' favorite idiot _

I hope t'episode brings you plot bunnies (thus, bringing me more spiffy Doctor Who fics!)

luv Peachmelba

aw poor mickey. lol

Awesome! It's a really good Mickey-fic, for the first time ever! You wrote him so well, i love the way he's challenging and brusque, just like the look on his face when he drops Rose at Clive's and he's trying to look threatening. I love it!

Aw - nice little piece on Mickey. And what they have DOES transcend favourite colours and stuff. They're deep :D

Aw, poor Mickey. I don't like him much - he is a bit of an idiot - but I feel a bit sorry for him in this.