Dear Kiki, it‘s such a pity you never finished this story. It is really interesting and I am totally curious if this pairing constellations (HxV vs YxD) would not lead to a big rift between the best friends...

Although not completed, I really enjoyed reading, so thank you!

Wow talk about a total mental case. Great story. I really liked what you did with Dil our resident PSYCHO! Anyways looking forward to your next chapter if you ever get around to it. Kinda looking forward to seeing what all Van did to make his Heart die on him when Hitomi asked that question

Hello,

I love your story, aren't you going to update?

please!

Michaela

I really like this, i know its been awhile since you last updated but are you going to make another one soon?

I really love this story; especially how you explain the fate of Dilandau. It's very good! I would like to know more about Van's situation. Keep writing on!

Wow! Fantastic story you have here. I hope you will continue it since you have given Dilandau plot twist. I'm really enjoying the story here with him and Yukari. I also like how you put everything together with the events that happened with the Fate Alteration machine and how it affected Celena and Dilandau. This story is fantastic. I really enjoyed it, and wish we could know more about how it will. You kind of left us in a cliffhanger. )

You have a really good story in your hands. It's the first time that I have read a fanfic that tried to explain what happened to Dilandau since everyone believes he just disappeared after Celena retured. Also, it's nice to see Van going to Earth and having to deal with everything here.

I would really enjoy to see what else you have in store for this story. It's getting interesting. )

-that girl how happens to find this story fasinating

I like your story. It brought intregeing ideas, especially like how you tied Dilandau to the story. It's praticlly the most interesting part how you thought of the idea he was a person who was in coma and drag to Gaea, very imagenative.

-Load the next chapter soon.

I stumbled upon your youtube video in my quest for Dilandau Videos and I liked it. I was likewise intrigued by a yukari-Dilandau pairing so I looke up your fic. And I am immensely glad I did. It is a wonderful piece of work. It's really impressive. What's even more astonishing is that English is not your first language! I feel almost ashamed to see how it is my first language and you are able to better employ it than I am. But no matter, this is only to show my extreme admiration of your work. You have somehow succeeded in bringing a very realistic and dramatic dimension to Escaflowne. As a rule, I don't really like reading Van-Hitomi fics, but this is an exception. Although the story tends to be very angsty and dramatic most of the time (especially the sappy moments between Van and Hitomi), I like it because I like Dilandau's presence in it. I don't mean to say that the story is bad, I am just not really a Van-Hitomi fan although I subscribe to their pairing. I am really interested in the progress of the budding relationship between Yukari and Dilandau. On that note, I am very impressed with your characterisation of Yukari. You gave her more depth. As for Dilandau, I am biased because he is my favorite character so as long as you include him in your story, you are brilliant.

Your explanation of the Fate Alteration Experiment is quite plausible and a good plot device. I do hope you update soon.

Again, kudos to you for great work.

Great story so far. I saw your equally brilliant video on Youtube so I decided to read. Wonderful. Escaflowne fan fiction tends to be sappy and shallow most of the time but this is a rare find. Excited to continue reading.

Very well done! I loved it. And the way you answered those questions about Dilly...very nice! I'm eagerly awaiting to see how Dilly deals with this info and Van. Everyone knows they are going to eventually run into each other again. That should be very interesting. Keep up the good work.

whoo! im done with ur novel.. hehe

hope to hear from u soon! pls do.. inform me, my email is

p.s pls dont make the encounters of hitomi and van too cheesy, it makes van not van at all..

:) but all the rest, U ARE SO TALENTED,. keep it up and hope ur writing improves very much!

yes ur ryt the pace is way slow, ive noticed that in chapter two, u tend to tell the story in too or full details

and yeah, the kissing part is way cheesy and van become too cynic or pessimistic...

no offense but on this chapter, the van i knew didnt seem to surface, he seemed a different character, the van shud have a strong personality..

how cud he have considered living in earth?

ahh.. everything was going swell but i didnt like the ending, the Van character shud be understanding and subtle to matters concerning parents, i dont think that hes true character wud be err..more of a selfish kinda guy..

but hey idont know.. im sorry.. uhmm.. maybe im ust to cocky.. :)