That was good. I can imagine Austin having a daughter. Plz update soon.

Lol, It's very good so far! I really wanna read the rest, so Please hurry up and update! Lol, and i want her to fall in love with Scott Evil! that would be so cool! Anyway, lol, Please Update!

Erm, you may want to consider changing the summary. It kinda suggest that this story is going to take an incestual swing.

Also I find it hard to believe Austin would believe that she was his daughter without proof.

I also doubt he'd allowed or be allowed to take some random adolescent along with him.

Other then that, keep writing, girl!

please update ! i love the story so far

Cool story. Please update soon.

Short and kinda good,keep posting more.

yo gurl! hey this was pretty good keep 'em coming! urs 4eva

~A