Ngawww hahaha how cute :D cute short story :D good luckies with your future stories :)

Always listen to black hay ate, the voice of wisdom!

First off, Hiromu Arakawa is the creator of FMA (I strangely memorized that name... lol xD)
Second off, this story is so sweet and adorable and cute and and! I LOVE IT!

I wonder how I missed this story. Anyway, EVERYTHING about it is awesome. Roy's perverted thoughts started it perfectly, he really would think something like that. Riza too, anyway. And then you wrapped the end so sweetly, this kind of display of affection suits them perfectly. Subtle, loving, caring, and somewhat perverted. I loved it~

love the fic

i just had a perverted thought i guess..

when the ice cream melted and roy found out about it...i just thought that he will lick it up...hahahhahahah

but its a nice story though

Perhaps, answers a dry voice from within his cranium. It depends on how one perceives this truly innocent combination. One of a perverse nature would see this and naturally come to perverse thoughts.

Roy curses the anonymous eloquent speaker. He is not perverse. He is merely… well informed.

In perverse things.

...

Mwahahahahahahaha. These lines made me laugh so hard. And in this oneshot, there is actually some strands of logic in it so it doesn't seem so much as a crackfic.

Excellent work.

Aww cute! I liked how you ended it. That's right Hayate sometimes a good bark is all it takes.

-Spark

Yes, chuui really means first lieutenant. Shōi is second lieutenant.

we! thats so kawaii... and sweet! hehe... luv the ending! really so cute! XP

That was so cute! Just one thing- though her name is Elizabeth and it would make more sense to call her Liza, she's actually called Riza. Other than that, good, and I'm sorry if someone's already told you about the whole Liza thing and I'm just being annoying, lol P

Xx-Bex-xX

Aww that was so cute! I love how Roy exaggerates...but I find he can be astounishingly right in some instances. Hmm...our beloved Roy. Great job!

Hurrah for Hayate, the romantic catalyst! Sometimes, you need look only to the least logical to realize what is most logical. I read the reviews before the story, to see what it was like, and I must say that Elizabeth is actually Hawkeye's first name (read the manga!). It's just that in Japanese, as far as I know, the 'l' sound we use in English is replaced with a more 'r'-like sound. Therefore, Riza, Liza, and Elizabeth are all proper names, just as Ishvar and Ishbal are (and so many other things). So, there you go. Other than the naming confusion, I have to say that this is one of the cuter, fluffier, lovelier pieces I've read, and perfect for the beginning of summer!

hey hawkeye's first name is riza not liza or elizabeth i don't know where you got that from but it is uncorrect nd b/c of that i kinda lost intrest in the story. sry for being harsh but... i don't like having to re read every time it says the wrong thing and replace it w/ the right thing in my mind so umm so sry for harsh ness but im a really serious fan of riza and roy i think their the best couple of any anime anywhere. ne-way bbfn(bye bye for now)

-ed elric/ Riza Hawkeye -x

aah! perverted mustang!

...but of course, when is he not?

eew. dirty thought. don't go there.

ja ne, andkeep writing,

kinokokichigai