I'd like to personally thank you for writing not only such a well written Ranma DBZ crossover, but also for being one of those rare few treasures of the Ranma fic world who actually finishes a story. Thank you.

Rohan & Ranko fused permentaly so since you don't say that trio (Ranma, Ranko & Gohan)how could Ranma return to the Tendo's since they would still be one person

Awesome story!

Amazing story great job thanks!

Ah...after escaping BUU Rohan (Ranma/Gohan) & Ranko used the Kabito Earrings which is a permeant fusion (unless eaten after fusion) yet they seperate like after the Fusion wears off

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

u should write a sequil if there isnt 1 already. i want 2 see what happens during the GT arc w/ the NWC added 2 the equation. so please if there isnt a sequil please write 1 if there is... well i better check out ur profile then.

was a cool story

I really like this story please continue to write.

Great story! I hope you right a sequel soon.

This story has turned into a rubber ball that's very quickly bouncing a long. I keep feeling each part could use some more attention. Perhaps you could go through them and lengthen them out.

It's not a bad start. I can see Akane thinking that Mr Satan would be a man that could teach her to be stronger. Of course while I think Akane would have reason to go to him, I think the reason you wrote out is a bit... cliche might be the right word for it. Why not have her go so Ranma wouldn't have to worry about her all the time?

But either way works. Just thought I'd drop you an idea. So far everything looks good. Take it easy.

i'm sorry, and i hope you excuse my language, but WTF?

it just seems so odd... haven't seen an nabiki/ranma pairing before... seems alien to me ::D

only seen akane and kasumi pairings before... this just kind of freaks me out because its new... and what about akane now?

Very nice but it feels unfullendet ... unfinished somehow and somehow so rushed. Akane is a lesbian. Akane is in love with Ranko. Why and how? How the heck is Ranko Ranmas sister. rushed. Ranma loves Nabiki. How and when did they fall in love. rushed. It is a if I am stating I am taking over the world and a few seconds later I have done that and no one know how I did it.

But i like it.

That was a good story, but if you ever decide to revisit this, could you at least develop the ending more? It's like you got 3/4 of the story done, and crammed the entire falling action into a single chapter. If you could, say, triple the length of the ending it would work. And yes, the Ranko/Akane thing was visible from a mile away, but you had them go from almost-strangers to lovers in a single chapter! WTF!